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5/13/2018 c2 5Lazy Imagination
Marvelous!,!
11/13/2015 c2 8Pally The Second
very cute
8/31/2015 c2 40captainhookcaptainfreedom
I loved this idea and fic and the way you had it play out! However, my only critique would be that you switch between 3rd person POV and 1st person POV and you do it quite a bit in such a short section of writing. I'd really love it if you were to do another chapter actually! I think you could make a really great longer fic out of what you have so far!
6/20/2015 c2 4Spitfire303
glad it had a happy ending :-)
5/29/2015 c2 Guest
You switched what perspective you were writing from multiple times - might be something to work on. Other than that, not bad, even though I don't exactly ship Carter/Thompson.
5/24/2015 c2 Guest
Really good :)
5/25/2015 c2 91oldmoviewatcher
This was fairly nice. Usually I'm not one for reading first person fics, but this is cute! Will you write more?
5/25/2015 c2 xpurplexbutterflyx
Love it..maybe you reveal what really happen in the closet...
5/24/2015 c2 fuckthissite
So cute! You should write a sequel!
5/22/2015 c1 2caitscat
Is he the father? If so I want a lemon! Lol keep going
5/19/2015 c1 Kaylee
KEEP ON UPDATING PLEASE
5/19/2015 c1 Guest
Huh! Intersting... so it was more then a kiss? Update soon...thumbs up!
5/19/2015 c1 Guest
I really like it! Please keep writing this I would love to see where it goes!
5/19/2015 c1 14Margo Vizzini-Montoya
That's quite the teaser of a chapter. Looking forward to more. The only suggestion my inner grammar-Natzi would have is to be aware of pronouns. You started off using third person 'he' and then switched to first person 'I'. Other than that muy excelente ; )
5/19/2015 c1 3Peggy Badass Carter
I was NOT expecting that! Good one... Please update soon :)

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