
1/18 c12 Guest
This is so cool! I live for this book.
This is so cool! I live for this book.
1/13/2022 c12 Sus
Writer’s block be like
Writer’s block be like
3/25/2020 c12 Guest
I hope you continue
Wanna see what viridi thinks of thanatos
I hope you continue
Wanna see what viridi thinks of thanatos
12/11/2019 c12 Guest
It may be a year since this fic updated but I'm on the last chapter (so far) and really enjoying it!
Also like.
Pit's the only angel, despite all the good human souls that must go to Skyworld.
Centurions can be revived from the dead.
We know from Hades that a massive amount of souls can be used to create Underworld troops.
These things look like they're lining up and I don't like how they look. Excited to see how this all plays out.
It may be a year since this fic updated but I'm on the last chapter (so far) and really enjoying it!
Also like.
Pit's the only angel, despite all the good human souls that must go to Skyworld.
Centurions can be revived from the dead.
We know from Hades that a massive amount of souls can be used to create Underworld troops.
These things look like they're lining up and I don't like how they look. Excited to see how this all plays out.
12/31/2018 c12 hi
Pandora is such a fun boss! She has so much personality that it's hard NOT to love her.
Pandora is such a fun boss! She has so much personality that it's hard NOT to love her.
12/23/2018 c12 WillOfTheWitch
The concept is interesting and I love how you've executed it, not only that, (unlike most fics.) the grammar is nearly impeccable. The only flaw I can find in it is that there are a couple of words that either don't need to be there or replaced. 8.5/10 so far but I bet you'll continue to get better and better as you write this.
Please continue this. It's such a shame when a good fanfiction is cancelled.
The concept is interesting and I love how you've executed it, not only that, (unlike most fics.) the grammar is nearly impeccable. The only flaw I can find in it is that there are a couple of words that either don't need to be there or replaced. 8.5/10 so far but I bet you'll continue to get better and better as you write this.
Please continue this. It's such a shame when a good fanfiction is cancelled.
11/21/2018 c12 Guest
This is a pretty cool story so far
This is a pretty cool story so far
9/4/2018 c1 Ck6Ij
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9/3/2018 c2 Guest
This is really well written!
This is really well written!
8/15/2018 c12 Neb
Hello lovely author, are you making progress?
Hello lovely author, are you making progress?
7/2/2018 c12
1ILiekFishes
Love the story, but I think that may be because of what a cool concept it is, although you do excecute it well. Please don’t go on another year long hiatus, that would be a shame. Also, just as a guess, I think that because the mirror of truth creates a true copy of the person, dark pit will be loyal to Palutena. Or he’s normal. Either or.

Love the story, but I think that may be because of what a cool concept it is, although you do excecute it well. Please don’t go on another year long hiatus, that would be a shame. Also, just as a guess, I think that because the mirror of truth creates a true copy of the person, dark pit will be loyal to Palutena. Or he’s normal. Either or.