
12/21/2015 c1 girl2025
okay, okay... that was quite a hot thing going on... lol... it was great to read but I would recommend that you add some more punctuation marks, such as these. do u follow my drift? but all in all, great job with it. please note that I'm just trying to help you out a bit. Great job again!
okay, okay... that was quite a hot thing going on... lol... it was great to read but I would recommend that you add some more punctuation marks, such as these. do u follow my drift? but all in all, great job with it. please note that I'm just trying to help you out a bit. Great job again!
12/21/2015 c1 girl2025
do u have any more stories like these because from what I can tell ur am amazing writer for real, I only read the first paragraph and it sounded great
do u have any more stories like these because from what I can tell ur am amazing writer for real, I only read the first paragraph and it sounded great
5/20/2015 c1 Nicole
Can't wait for Wednesday :)
Can't wait for Wednesday :)