6/4/2016 c3 1OBSERVER01
Good shinji wakes up every morning like that? Shinji you lucky SoB! Naruto why did you vandalize the hokage monument when you know how close shinji is to the Sandaime?! I look forward to the next chapter to see mizuki get a massive beatdown by naruto,shinji,asuka and wonder who their jounin sensei will be. I recommend anko.

6/4/2016 c3 13Merchant Of Blue Death
A really good update, it was nice seeing this first thing in the morning. At least the length of the update offset the wait.

The defacing of the monument and the consequences was a good scene, Shinji as you said is rarely mad and in this case pissed off to the max. The best part was you not showing his punishment but leaving it to the readers imagination as he's talks to Shinji while being 'escorted' back to school by the trio.

I love how the personalities of the three are basically the same, the growth and changes in them stand out. Asuka and Shinji now compliment each other very well and Rei's growth is amazing. She's taken on some of Asuka's traits but since she's so quiet when she displays said traits it chilling. Her just checking her medical supplies is a good example as shown by Naruto's reactions.

The conversation between the girls regarding the difficulty, or lack of, with the graduation exam is eye opening as is the body location they both pick to wear their head bands. Shinji's reaction to Naruto's failure is telling. No doubt the three are close to him and are not happy with his treatment, to them, I think, the final test was rigged to fail him. That's something they have a problem with considering that they have time and effort invested in his training. The fact that Naruto see's Shinji as a brother is a nice touch.

Another thing I like is the scenes of the three at home relaxing. I'm surprised that it's Rei that has Misato's kitchen skills, I would have guessed it would be Asuka. The way these two have bonded over the years is very good, Shinji will never be alone in life this time around, it's too bad that Toji or Kensuke aren't around to tease him like they did the first time. I wonder how they would react to this Shinji? One thing's for sure, punching him in the face would not be a good thing. It would interesting to see if Shinji ever misses those two or are they just to the back of his mind like the rest of his past life? I also loved the relaxing clothes Asuka picked, yellow shirt and cut off shorts, shades of Misato? Now that she's a kunoichi she's considered an adult, does this mean she's going be have a fridge stocked with beer and take up more of her former guardian and big sister's traits? The cross Asuka gave Rei was also a nice touch, at first in my mind I read it as silver but as it's red I take it as not only a reminder of who she got it from but also in remembrance of Misato. Rei is even more interesting in this as this time she actually has to go through puberty for the first time, at least she has Asuka and Yugao to help her through it. Speaking of puberty, Shinji is also interesting, not only has Asuka accepted him and shows her affection to him openly, he has Rei at his side as well. He's lucky to have a chance to live in a world where multiple partners are accepted but is in some cases encouraged such as the CRA, while not canon it's still a good plot device. Shinji waking to these beauties every morning is a fate I'm jealous of, not really, I've had several girlfriends at one time in the days of my wasted youth, too much trouble for the promised rewards. I just like his growth and maturity that you've given him, I see some of the Shinji from my stories in him, that's to say he's no longer the wimp and while there's steel in his spine he's still respectful to others and loving to his girls and adopted family.

Now the three get their fist C rank. The fact that they are putting forth a good assessment and defense of the blond idiot is telling. I loved Shinji explaining to his father Asuka's definition of an idiot and a stupid person, classic Asuka. I can't wait to read the next update to see how not only the trio act but how well Naruto will do when the truth comes out. I just don't want to see how Asuka and Shinji react, well I do, it just seems that what Mizuki suffered in canon is mild compared to what not only Naruto dishes out but the trio as well. Hopefully it's fatal to avoid further trouble and grief down the line.

All in all this was great read and worth the wait.

6/4/2016 c3 5Orchamus
Almost forgot about this, just as good as ever though, such excellent interaction between the three Children is a pleasure to read.

4/14/2016 c2 LuBu081
I'm kinda confused. Didn't Rei basically become God at the end of the anime? Did she do more than just give herself a young body, like withholding her omnipotent powers back until a certain age or something?

4/7/2016 c2 Risingsun
I don't know why, but something tell my what Hinata and Rei will not get along with each other ( maybe that "Rei-chan" has something to do with this, jealously is something powerfull afterall) anyways , you already lose Hinata! Because Rei is amazing ! ( and much better than you).

I Love the history so much, Asuka surely like to troll other people n.n

I guess I know who will be their jounin-sensei, but I don't like the spoiler, so for now I will keep silence.

See you soon!.

3/10/2016 c2 Tribunal of War
Love it, please keep it up the awesome work.

12/18/2015 c2 4Mythfan
Nice character development.