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12/7/2022 c13 Rouss Bz
noo, how can you tell the wolves before the cullens? It seems wrong to me!, that he could not tell the cullens because nobody could know, after several events where he could have spoken to them and explained things, even when they were practically family and he told the wolves at the first opportunity, that they're nothing, he doesn't even know most of them, just jacob and billy. Very bad Hermione, it was not like that, first the family is informed, then the friends, the fact that they left without further ado was her fault, I hope she does not make Edward pay for the mistake that she herself made by not trusting in them, and tell them on time and not at the last moment, since he realized that he could no longer lie to them, and unfortunately it was already too late when he tried.
4/10/2022 c20 Manderin07
Another great story! I very much like that you didn't have her fall into despondency when they left. That's one of the things I hated most about twilight canon. Hermione is too much a strong badass witch to let that break her after everything else she has survived. Looking forward to reading part 3!
3/10/2022 c5 1StayMist
that's Hermione for you, emotionally stable and sane. I love her HAHAHA
9/10/2021 c18 lashawn
I’m really late to the party but I’ll cast my vote anyway. I would love to see Hermoine marry and have a baby. With her being a witch the pregnancy shouldn’t be gruesome like Bella’s. It would be nice for Teddy to grow up with a sibling that is unique like him.
6/27/2021 c5
Hmmm ... it's sort of weird that she doesn't care that much that Edward left.

I guess that shows how much more emotionally independent she is than Bella, and that's a good thing. But it sort of guts the drama from the story. If Edward leaving feels like it's no big deal, the story sort of comes off flat.
5/23/2021 c8 Hello
MY FATHER WILL HEAR ABOUT THIS! - said Draco Malfoys pet ferret
5/23/2021 c2 Hello
Malfoy definitely also i really like your stuff it's wonderful.
11/6/2020 c2 Amber.Rogers.Barnes
I wanted it to be Neville or Draco
8/31/2020 c1 Me
I don't get it this story is confuussinnggg
3/8/2020 c4 Gryffindor Girl
Why are they calling Hermione 'Bella'. Do they think she is Bella or something? I they do, can you explain. And why did charlie first call her Bella but as they atlked more he called her Hermione. Please explain. Love the amazing work so far, keep it up!
2/17/2020 c18 deanna4403
me noharry with ginny
6/1/2019 c20 Kushka
Good story
4/24/2019 c4 2lkdaswani
11/17/2018 c8 aestheticavacados
Oof I want Draco to appear later
4/22/2018 c20 Guest
I AM NOW HYPED FOR EARTSHINE! I was the one who message a while ago at Afterlight. I have very high hopes for Earthshine, I really do. Good work mate!
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