for A Borrowed Heart5/22/2015 c1 Guest
Great story! More
Great story! More
5/23/2015 c1 
70Silmarilz1701
Not gonna lie, I don't understand everything cause I'm not in the HP fandom (yet), but the prologue sounds good. Good pacing, good word choice. Excellent start! Can't wait to room with you next school year and maybe even help you!
70Silmarilz1701Not gonna lie, I don't understand everything cause I'm not in the HP fandom (yet), but the prologue sounds good. Good pacing, good word choice. Excellent start! Can't wait to room with you next school year and maybe even help you!