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19/30/2019 c49 Guest666-69
So glad to see you updated but it looks like this update has been up some time so I guess I'm just slacking on checking updates lol. A strip club? That should be entertaining ;) I wonder if Ace will ask Shiori about her sharing a kiss with another girl? Do you suppose it'll make Ace jealous? Will his mind go haywire with fantasies? Or will he be jealous? I bet he'll be a bit quiet and thinking about it the whole time even during a lap dance if he gets one. As far as Ace getting a lap dance, I can see Ace simply pulling Shiori close (if not sitting on his lap sideways) to give the message that she is his 'entertainment' and the strippers are for the rest of his crew. That way neither he nor Shiori can get a lap dance since I can picture Ace being possessive & jealous when it comes to Shiori but would try to not seem like that in case it'd upset Shiori somehow xD Fun read and I'm the next couple chapters will be even more 'fun' so I look forward to more ;)
So glad to see you updated but it looks like this update has been up some time so I guess I'm just slacking on checking updates lol. A strip club? That should be entertaining ;) I wonder if Ace will ask Shiori about her sharing a kiss with another girl? Do you suppose it'll make Ace jealous? Will his mind go haywire with fantasies? Or will he be jealous? I bet he'll be a bit quiet and thinking about it the whole time even during a lap dance if he gets one. As far as Ace getting a lap dance, I can see Ace simply pulling Shiori close (if not sitting on his lap sideways) to give the message that she is his 'entertainment' and the strippers are for the rest of his crew. That way neither he nor Shiori can get a lap dance since I can picture Ace being possessive & jealous when it comes to Shiori but would try to not seem like that in case it'd upset Shiori somehow xD Fun read and I'm the next couple chapters will be even more 'fun' so I look forward to more ;)
7/11/2019 c48 Guest666-69
Goody an update! I'm on pins and needles with Ace & Shiori. Bet Ace will be surprised and a little disappointed when he wakes up and realizes Shiori nor her things are in his room. I can understand why Shiori is upset about O'Hara but I understand why Ace didn't mention her to Shiori either.
Goody an update! I'm on pins and needles with Ace & Shiori. Bet Ace will be surprised and a little disappointed when he wakes up and realizes Shiori nor her things are in his room. I can understand why Shiori is upset about O'Hara but I understand why Ace didn't mention her to Shiori either.
1/11/2019 c47 Guest666-69
OMG I just noticed that you updated! Great chapter. Excited for more Shiori x Ace moments 3
OMG I just noticed that you updated! Great chapter. Excited for more Shiori x Ace moments 3
11/24/2018 c46 Jeannie
I freaked out when you killed off Vanora in the last chapter omgggggg you meanie! I'm happy and so sooo relieved to see her safe and sound though! That was a really creative way to save her, nicely done...
This chapter had alot of very descriptive writing. You are great at vivid details and scenes with lots of tension.
Really my only criticism of this would be to update more often but I know you're doing the best you can. I would love to see more of this story done in any case. And mostly, I can't WAIT to see what happens next!
I freaked out when you killed off Vanora in the last chapter omgggggg you meanie! I'm happy and so sooo relieved to see her safe and sound though! That was a really creative way to save her, nicely done...
This chapter had alot of very descriptive writing. You are great at vivid details and scenes with lots of tension.
Really my only criticism of this would be to update more often but I know you're doing the best you can. I would love to see more of this story done in any case. And mostly, I can't WAIT to see what happens next!
11/20/2018 c46 Guest666-69
Oh I'm so happy to see you updated! I can't believe I didn't notice the update until now though. I look forward to more AceShi time. Especially since this fight seems resolved... For now. I wonder if Shiori would try to push aside any feelings of jealousy of another woman being with Ace since she and Ace were not a thing or even in contact then. Can she be upset about it? Yes, but within reason. And honestly if I were Shiori I'd be more upset Ace preferred to hide then be honest with Shiori even though his relationship with O'Hara was long over before reuniting with Shiori. I guess it's possible he didn't want Shiori to know about O'Hara because he was worried Shiori may think Ace would just lie about how he feels about her (shiori) then end it after he has his fun with her. I can picture Shiori forgiving Ace on the condition that he swears to never lie or hide anything from her that she should or may want to know.
Loved! Can't wait for more AceShi!
Oh I'm so happy to see you updated! I can't believe I didn't notice the update until now though. I look forward to more AceShi time. Especially since this fight seems resolved... For now. I wonder if Shiori would try to push aside any feelings of jealousy of another woman being with Ace since she and Ace were not a thing or even in contact then. Can she be upset about it? Yes, but within reason. And honestly if I were Shiori I'd be more upset Ace preferred to hide then be honest with Shiori even though his relationship with O'Hara was long over before reuniting with Shiori. I guess it's possible he didn't want Shiori to know about O'Hara because he was worried Shiori may think Ace would just lie about how he feels about her (shiori) then end it after he has his fun with her. I can picture Shiori forgiving Ace on the condition that he swears to never lie or hide anything from her that she should or may want to know.
Loved! Can't wait for more AceShi!
8/5/2018 c45 Guest666-69
Poor Vanora! If what O'Hara claims is true, I honestly expected it. Especially considering how Ace seemed to desperately not want Shiori to know about O'Hara or how he knows her. And given your warning before the chapter I expected more sexual activity between Ace & Shiori. I also half expected Shiori or Vanora to discover Ace in the middle of sex with O'Hara though against his will more or less. Kinda glad that wasn't the case but it seems there was a relationship between them in the past before things went south in what I assume was in a very violent or negative way. I look forward to more! So sad about Vanora ;_;
Poor Vanora! If what O'Hara claims is true, I honestly expected it. Especially considering how Ace seemed to desperately not want Shiori to know about O'Hara or how he knows her. And given your warning before the chapter I expected more sexual activity between Ace & Shiori. I also half expected Shiori or Vanora to discover Ace in the middle of sex with O'Hara though against his will more or less. Kinda glad that wasn't the case but it seems there was a relationship between them in the past before things went south in what I assume was in a very violent or negative way. I look forward to more! So sad about Vanora ;_;
7/7/2018 c44 Guest
Yay I was waiting for that for a while I loved it! I hope they are more intimate soon they deserve it, to be together sexually, after all the teaseing and the death scares and loss around them
Yay I was waiting for that for a while I loved it! I hope they are more intimate soon they deserve it, to be together sexually, after all the teaseing and the death scares and loss around them
7/5/2018 c44 Jeannie
Hey it's me again! YAY i'm finally all caught up! :D
I love everything about the last few chapters! Ace x Shiori is definitely my favorite OC OTP ATM (so many acronyms ACK!) anyway they're very cute together. I feel like you're doing a fantastic job on this whole fic, even if the pacing is a little slow, it's the building up to it that really keeps people (like me lol) hooked.
I'm so excited to see where this goes and how things will play out for them in the long run. i dont want it to be rushed but wuld love for them to figure out 'what they are', as you put it. I kinda want more plot stuff too although the romance is great as well
Amazing story, 10/10 so far! Shiori YOU GO GIRL!
Hey it's me again! YAY i'm finally all caught up! :D
I love everything about the last few chapters! Ace x Shiori is definitely my favorite OC OTP ATM (so many acronyms ACK!) anyway they're very cute together. I feel like you're doing a fantastic job on this whole fic, even if the pacing is a little slow, it's the building up to it that really keeps people (like me lol) hooked.
I'm so excited to see where this goes and how things will play out for them in the long run. i dont want it to be rushed but wuld love for them to figure out 'what they are', as you put it. I kinda want more plot stuff too although the romance is great as well
Amazing story, 10/10 so far! Shiori YOU GO GIRL!