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I LOVE THIS VERSION OMG, I’m only Chapter 5 and this is the best rendition of Kakashi being a functioning shinobi disaster human I have ever seen! Not to mention the realistic outlook on how Naruto’s childhood truly affected him too! Top kudos to you fr fr
1MangaKarmaI LOVE THIS VERSION OMG, I’m only Chapter 5 and this is the best rendition of Kakashi being a functioning shinobi disaster human I have ever seen! Not to mention the realistic outlook on how Naruto’s childhood truly affected him too! Top kudos to you fr fr
3/26 c29 Guest
i really enjoy how well reasoned each of your writing decisions are. the explanations of each event make sense and i like how you acknowledge character’s strengths even though they might lose. I’m really enjoying this story so far
i really enjoy how well reasoned each of your writing decisions are. the explanations of each event make sense and i like how you acknowledge character’s strengths even though they might lose. I’m really enjoying this story so far
3/14 c1 Guest
I like it
I like it
3/5 c1 elisarobinson92
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Every great story" Chiaroscuro
" deserves to be more than just words—it deserves to be seen. Picture your characters brought to life, their emotions captured in every detail, and the action unfolding panel by panel.
I specialize in transforming stories into captivating comics that not only tell your tale but enhance it. Your world, your vision, your masterpiece—I’ll bring it all to life with stunning visuals that capture readers from the very first frame.
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1/26 c6 insanecoop
How many times did the author puke writing this, im guessing enough to learn how to relax their throat.
How many times did the author puke writing this, im guessing enough to learn how to relax their throat.
1/26 c5 insanecoop
I'm rather impressed so many people got past this chapter to review.
If I have to read much more about the author taking it deep over Kakashi, I think ill leave.
I'm rather impressed so many people got past this chapter to review.
If I have to read much more about the author taking it deep over Kakashi, I think ill leave.
12/28/2024 c5 Guest
"What if I told you that, hypothetically, our prices are very carefully determined and set by a board of highly trained accountants, and that what we are charging right now is the optimal price, no questions asked?" Kakashi-sensei whispered. "And, hypothetically, what if this situation was real? Would you sacrifice some of Konoha's income, in anticipation for dealing with damages from Suna that may or may not come? You saw the sign at their front gate. Even if we raised our prices a little, people would still come to us. Matching our prices with Suna, even temporarily, will result in a greater loss of money than they could ever deal us in war reparations. What would you do, if you were the Hokage?"
Well, I would interrogate several of these supposed “accountants” for treason. Because there are several issues with the entire Suna-Konoha “market war”, and they really only make sense if it’s because of stupidity or outside interference. Perhaps this is all some sort of scheme by Orochimaru/Danzo.
Why? Well…
The most basic rule of the market is the relation between supply, demand, and price. Supply goes up, cost goes down; demand goes up, cost goes up.
In this case, supply is available ninja and demand is missions.
Konoha is cheaper than Suna, and more people move missions to Konoha… which increases demand. Meanwhile there is no corresponding increase in ninja “supply” in Konoha - nothing significant at least. So, prices would increase to deal with the increased demand.
Meanwhile, in Suna, demand decreases by nearly 40% but the supply stays the same. *Fourty-Fucking-Percent!* The only move is to decrease cost. There’s no *fucking* way the supposed “accountants” are acting correctly.
But neither side is acting appropriately: Konoha maintains cheaper prices it shouldn’t be able to afford with the extra demand to their ninja’s time, and Suna apparently thinks a decrease of prices to accommodate the demand is such an insult to their pride they’d rather just not get paid at all.
If even one side decided to regulate their prices to better reflect the market, then more people would end up going to Suna - either Konoha would increase prices or Suna would decrease theirs, and in that way more missions would move to Suna, and they would recoup some of their losses.
This is ignoring the other, non-market issues, like the Suna Daimyo deciding to send his missions to Konoha… which, as the leader of a nation who depends on their Village for sovereignty, should *never* be the case, even if Konoha prices are 1% that of Suna. It’s a statement that the Suna Daimyo has written off his own ninja village and basically considers Suna a protectorate of Konoha. Konoha, as an *ally* of Suna, who is allied for reasons beyond just being benevolent - that there is tangible benefit to being an ally to one of the great ninja villages - should *also* recognize this issue with the Suna Daimyo and refuse him… or, they should do *something* in response.
The whole argument about having less missions in Konoha would decrease their livelihoods is simply false: Konoha did not have that number of missions originally, this is a recent increase. And these missions aren’t priced higher, so it’s not like an individual ninja cares if they do one or the other, they get paid the same.
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In the end, yes, there are fundamental issues with how the Suna-Konoha market war is treated, both in canon, and here in this fic; and yes, Konoha *can* take actions that help their ally.
"What if I told you that, hypothetically, our prices are very carefully determined and set by a board of highly trained accountants, and that what we are charging right now is the optimal price, no questions asked?" Kakashi-sensei whispered. "And, hypothetically, what if this situation was real? Would you sacrifice some of Konoha's income, in anticipation for dealing with damages from Suna that may or may not come? You saw the sign at their front gate. Even if we raised our prices a little, people would still come to us. Matching our prices with Suna, even temporarily, will result in a greater loss of money than they could ever deal us in war reparations. What would you do, if you were the Hokage?"
Well, I would interrogate several of these supposed “accountants” for treason. Because there are several issues with the entire Suna-Konoha “market war”, and they really only make sense if it’s because of stupidity or outside interference. Perhaps this is all some sort of scheme by Orochimaru/Danzo.
Why? Well…
The most basic rule of the market is the relation between supply, demand, and price. Supply goes up, cost goes down; demand goes up, cost goes up.
In this case, supply is available ninja and demand is missions.
Konoha is cheaper than Suna, and more people move missions to Konoha… which increases demand. Meanwhile there is no corresponding increase in ninja “supply” in Konoha - nothing significant at least. So, prices would increase to deal with the increased demand.
Meanwhile, in Suna, demand decreases by nearly 40% but the supply stays the same. *Fourty-Fucking-Percent!* The only move is to decrease cost. There’s no *fucking* way the supposed “accountants” are acting correctly.
But neither side is acting appropriately: Konoha maintains cheaper prices it shouldn’t be able to afford with the extra demand to their ninja’s time, and Suna apparently thinks a decrease of prices to accommodate the demand is such an insult to their pride they’d rather just not get paid at all.
If even one side decided to regulate their prices to better reflect the market, then more people would end up going to Suna - either Konoha would increase prices or Suna would decrease theirs, and in that way more missions would move to Suna, and they would recoup some of their losses.
This is ignoring the other, non-market issues, like the Suna Daimyo deciding to send his missions to Konoha… which, as the leader of a nation who depends on their Village for sovereignty, should *never* be the case, even if Konoha prices are 1% that of Suna. It’s a statement that the Suna Daimyo has written off his own ninja village and basically considers Suna a protectorate of Konoha. Konoha, as an *ally* of Suna, who is allied for reasons beyond just being benevolent - that there is tangible benefit to being an ally to one of the great ninja villages - should *also* recognize this issue with the Suna Daimyo and refuse him… or, they should do *something* in response.
The whole argument about having less missions in Konoha would decrease their livelihoods is simply false: Konoha did not have that number of missions originally, this is a recent increase. And these missions aren’t priced higher, so it’s not like an individual ninja cares if they do one or the other, they get paid the same.
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In the end, yes, there are fundamental issues with how the Suna-Konoha market war is treated, both in canon, and here in this fic; and yes, Konoha *can* take actions that help their ally.
12/14/2024 c44 fanficlovah69
My god...in my 10 years of browsing ...You get my only favorite and follow till date.
I wish nothing but happiness for you, my friend.
My god...in my 10 years of browsing ...You get my only favorite and follow till date.
I wish nothing but happiness for you, my friend.
10/26/2024 c54 Guest
"Even in his death, everything that exited that man's lips had come straight from his heart." This line is straight fire, and so is the rest of this fic
"Even in his death, everything that exited that man's lips had come straight from his heart." This line is straight fire, and so is the rest of this fic
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