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6/18/2015 c1 3gwenfake88
this is very good! i like how it keeps you in suspence till the ending.
5/25/2015 c1 Guest
This is so fricken beautiful!
Everything thing fell into place quite well and I just love how you finished off the ending with Alejandro's tio's reason for his trick. AWESOME JOB! :-)
5/25/2015 c1 4flower1815
awwww, that was such a cute and sweet story!
5/25/2015 c1 159SideshowJazz1
This was good! I could see Heather not being able to be hypnotized - she can't be controlled.

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