for Another Love10/30/2022 c35 
5ajmaru
Oh. My. Godric... I absolutely adore, no love, the story! I hope to see more of it. I especially love Godric’s point of view and how possessive and caring he can become. His angry interactions with Bill are are also spectacular, I really do not like Bill at all.
5ajmaruOh. My. Godric... I absolutely adore, no love, the story! I hope to see more of it. I especially love Godric’s point of view and how possessive and caring he can become. His angry interactions with Bill are are also spectacular, I really do not like Bill at all.
10/18/2022 c1 desiree-pow-35-1986
Amazing So Far Sweetheart!
However I disagree with this chapter when Charlie thinks that Bella is too sweet and fragile girl...
NO the hell she not because if she was she wouldn't have an old type soul too her and she wouldn't be able too raise her mother...
Yes Bella did raised her mother from the age of 5 or 7 and even the person who wrote the books even said that Bella mother Renee was a very flighty person...
Meaning Bella had too be the adult at suck a young age and also get a job too pay bill and food because her mother forgot and yes Bella grew up too fast...
THESE ARE MY THOUGHTS ON HOW I FEEL ABOUT THE TWLIGHT BOOKSMOVIES...
I don't like Charlie because he put his job and his friends and his town in Forks first more then his daughter and it's is the reason why Renee left him...
I mean I'm sorry but he really hasn't seen his daughter in years before Bella moved in with him at the age of 17...
You can't just decide too be a parent and start tell Bella what too do... Like NO and I'm sorry but Bella was more of his maid then anything else...
She cooked and clean and did is own damn laundry and pick up the food... She his daughter not maid...
Also about Edward and Alicie what they did too Bella was soo fucked up its not even funny and it wasn't even fucking love at all but all the dazzling shit they did...
Yes they did too dazzled her it's why Bella never fought for her freedom of them and why she always change her mind when she didn't want too do something...
It's the reason why she went in zombie mode because NO fucking breakup makes any girl act that way...
It's the dazzling that they did on her because even Edward said they draw in the prey with the dazzling, it's like being on drug...
Bella got to used too the dazzling it's why she acted the way she did because she was going through withdrawal..
Amazing So Far Sweetheart!
However I disagree with this chapter when Charlie thinks that Bella is too sweet and fragile girl...
NO the hell she not because if she was she wouldn't have an old type soul too her and she wouldn't be able too raise her mother...
Yes Bella did raised her mother from the age of 5 or 7 and even the person who wrote the books even said that Bella mother Renee was a very flighty person...
Meaning Bella had too be the adult at suck a young age and also get a job too pay bill and food because her mother forgot and yes Bella grew up too fast...
THESE ARE MY THOUGHTS ON HOW I FEEL ABOUT THE TWLIGHT BOOKSMOVIES...
I don't like Charlie because he put his job and his friends and his town in Forks first more then his daughter and it's is the reason why Renee left him...
I mean I'm sorry but he really hasn't seen his daughter in years before Bella moved in with him at the age of 17...
You can't just decide too be a parent and start tell Bella what too do... Like NO and I'm sorry but Bella was more of his maid then anything else...
She cooked and clean and did is own damn laundry and pick up the food... She his daughter not maid...
Also about Edward and Alicie what they did too Bella was soo fucked up its not even funny and it wasn't even fucking love at all but all the dazzling shit they did...
Yes they did too dazzled her it's why Bella never fought for her freedom of them and why she always change her mind when she didn't want too do something...
It's the reason why she went in zombie mode because NO fucking breakup makes any girl act that way...
It's the dazzling that they did on her because even Edward said they draw in the prey with the dazzling, it's like being on drug...
Bella got to used too the dazzling it's why she acted the way she did because she was going through withdrawal..
3/6/2022 c35 4Olivia Williams
Great story a real shame u stopped writing it, can I find it some where else?
4Olivia WilliamsGreat story a real shame u stopped writing it, can I find it some where else?
2/11/2022 c16 3LoneButterfly05
The only prob I have with this story is Bellas innocence is to the poi t of foolishness. I get that Edward kinda did alot of damage to her by constantly rejecting her, and she now is confused by her bodies desires, but the kissing thing was way over the top. Any child who has watched a movie, or had sex ed, or read a romance novel knows that kissing can and usually does involve tongue. This part made her seem like a 7 year old and I honestly dont see how she could possibly revert back that far. Its goi g to be great that Godric will help her with her desires, but yeah, the kissing thing was way too far this time.
3LoneButterfly05The only prob I have with this story is Bellas innocence is to the poi t of foolishness. I get that Edward kinda did alot of damage to her by constantly rejecting her, and she now is confused by her bodies desires, but the kissing thing was way over the top. Any child who has watched a movie, or had sex ed, or read a romance novel knows that kissing can and usually does involve tongue. This part made her seem like a 7 year old and I honestly dont see how she could possibly revert back that far. Its goi g to be great that Godric will help her with her desires, but yeah, the kissing thing was way too far this time.
10/12/2021 c20 7MrsNShelby2021
winds me up when bellas all like oh I'm not ready for a relationship yet girl shut up your 18! move the fuck on from dickless! godric is more then a damn casual fling
7MrsNShelby2021winds me up when bellas all like oh I'm not ready for a relationship yet girl shut up your 18! move the fuck on from dickless! godric is more then a damn casual fling
10/12/2021 c17 MrsNShelby2021
so shes gonna trust a man that just pops up suddenly out of no where over Eric who has done nothing but help her and been nice to her? if godric is her mate how can you make her a fairy?
so shes gonna trust a man that just pops up suddenly out of no where over Eric who has done nothing but help her and been nice to her? if godric is her mate how can you make her a fairy?
10/12/2021 c9 MrsNShelby2021
I don't think Bella should be telling jake anything about what's going on vampires like their privacy. she shouldn't even still be talking to jake his never gonna accept just being her friend and she's a fool to think he will. this should be a three way relationship Eric and godric mated to Bella. I hate sookie shes annoying as hell and whiny
I don't think Bella should be telling jake anything about what's going on vampires like their privacy. she shouldn't even still be talking to jake his never gonna accept just being her friend and she's a fool to think he will. this should be a three way relationship Eric and godric mated to Bella. I hate sookie shes annoying as hell and whiny
7/2/2021 c35 Guest
I have to tell you that I really enjoyed reading your story,”Another Love” I hope you get a chance to finish it! Good Luck!
I have to tell you that I really enjoyed reading your story,”Another Love” I hope you get a chance to finish it! Good Luck!