for On Wings of Steel4/6 c13 PCHeintz72
Been a yeah... hope this is due for an update soon... I tend to follow this and the Love Hina story you have with Shiro in it.
Been a yeah... hope this is due for an update soon... I tend to follow this and the Love Hina story you have with Shiro in it.
1/6 c4 
1Prodigal Priest
Y'know... there's another way than to have sex with Akitsu to fix her Scrap Number status. Rule Breaker. It breaks magical contracts with no consequences for either side. So if you wanted to you could go that route and showcase Akitsu choosing to stay with Shirou AFTER she becomes able to Bond with someone.
1Prodigal PriestY'know... there's another way than to have sex with Akitsu to fix her Scrap Number status. Rule Breaker. It breaks magical contracts with no consequences for either side. So if you wanted to you could go that route and showcase Akitsu choosing to stay with Shirou AFTER she becomes able to Bond with someone.
12/23/2024 c7 BeoWolf666
The underwear store is the one battlefield. Shirou will not step foot into, thats a different kind of hell he’d be walking into
The underwear store is the one battlefield. Shirou will not step foot into, thats a different kind of hell he’d be walking into
9/4/2024 c11 12FiendLurcher
Not a huge fan of the gun versions, since they're kind of garbage, but whatever. Good intrigue and build-up.
12FiendLurcherNot a huge fan of the gun versions, since they're kind of garbage, but whatever. Good intrigue and build-up.
6/3/2024 c13 Guest
Huuuuuuh? I thought copyright infringement was illegal?
Being a cuck isn’t. And neither is being. Self-righteous brat. and neither is being in a circlejerk. But come on. I thought someone would get the hint by pretty obvious.
Huuuuuuh? I thought copyright infringement was illegal?
Being a cuck isn’t. And neither is being. Self-righteous brat. and neither is being in a circlejerk. But come on. I thought someone would get the hint by pretty obvious.
5/10/2024 c13 Guest
Great chapter!
I really appreciate you posting here, so thanks for that.
Great chapter!
I really appreciate you posting here, so thanks for that.
4/10/2024 c11 Dareth
I think it's fairly obvious why EMIYA never came up with those weird gunswords...they function as, both, unwieldy awkward guns, and horribly impractical swords...
I think it's fairly obvious why EMIYA never came up with those weird gunswords...they function as, both, unwieldy awkward guns, and horribly impractical swords...
4/8/2024 c13 E
I've got to say, the plot is excellent and the characterizarion is very enjoyable. I've read up to 31 anxd it's only gotten better.
But seriously, it is insane that you have 31 written chapters and you have only posted 13. I cannot fathom a reason why that'd be. I get the whole "more on patreon" thing, but these aren't even subscriber only, they're just fully done and open to anyone who opens the link. Why are they just arbitrarily not posted? It can't be some kind of ploy to get people to join the discord server because you can do what I did; which is join, get the link, then leave. This decision is incomprehensible.
The story is good, though. No problems there.
I've got to say, the plot is excellent and the characterizarion is very enjoyable. I've read up to 31 anxd it's only gotten better.
But seriously, it is insane that you have 31 written chapters and you have only posted 13. I cannot fathom a reason why that'd be. I get the whole "more on patreon" thing, but these aren't even subscriber only, they're just fully done and open to anyone who opens the link. Why are they just arbitrarily not posted? It can't be some kind of ploy to get people to join the discord server because you can do what I did; which is join, get the link, then leave. This decision is incomprehensible.
The story is good, though. No problems there.
4/8/2024 c13 E
I've got to say, the plot is excellent and the characterizarion is very enjoyable. I've read up to 31 anxd it's only gotten better.
But seriously, it is insane that you have 31 written chapters and you have only posted 13. I cannot fathom a reason why that'd be. I get the whole "more on patreon" thing, but these aren't even subscriber only, they're just fully done and open to anyone who opens the link. Why are they just arbitrarily not posted? It can't be some kind of ploy to get people to join the discord server because you can do what I did; which is join, get the link, then leave. This decision is incomprehensible.
The story is good, though. No problems there.
I've got to say, the plot is excellent and the characterizarion is very enjoyable. I've read up to 31 anxd it's only gotten better.
But seriously, it is insane that you have 31 written chapters and you have only posted 13. I cannot fathom a reason why that'd be. I get the whole "more on patreon" thing, but these aren't even subscriber only, they're just fully done and open to anyone who opens the link. Why are they just arbitrarily not posted? It can't be some kind of ploy to get people to join the discord server because you can do what I did; which is join, get the link, then leave. This decision is incomprehensible.
The story is good, though. No problems there.
4/9/2024 c13 2D72
I know Seo was friends with Takehito Asama, but it would be funnier if he was also the drinking buddy of Kiritsugu.
"Man, that dude never shut up about vampires. Weepy drunk too. I was glad when that Blonde picked him up. How's he doing?"
2D72I know Seo was friends with Takehito Asama, but it would be funnier if he was also the drinking buddy of Kiritsugu.
"Man, that dude never shut up about vampires. Weepy drunk too. I was glad when that Blonde picked him up. How's he doing?"
4/5/2024 c13 Guest
Oh hey it’s an update by the possible future reason for harsher copyright laws because his inability to take criticism lead to exclusive stuff guy.
I wish I could just know you as the creator of top one of all like three Medea fanfics guy.
But also being the cuck guy and not knowing how FanFiction works guy kinda overshadows that.
Which is unfortunate, because you being known more for the fetish stuff and money & clout stuff makes me less excited for your updates.
Oh hey it’s an update by the possible future reason for harsher copyright laws because his inability to take criticism lead to exclusive stuff guy.
I wish I could just know you as the creator of top one of all like three Medea fanfics guy.
But also being the cuck guy and not knowing how FanFiction works guy kinda overshadows that.
Which is unfortunate, because you being known more for the fetish stuff and money & clout stuff makes me less excited for your updates.