for Come Undone10/12/2016 c24 Mistydeb
Carlilse has done a complete 360 with his attitude. Mmm, Edward needs to be careful with Brady, he's definately up to something. Debbie
Carlilse has done a complete 360 with his attitude. Mmm, Edward needs to be careful with Brady, he's definately up to something. Debbie
10/12/2016 c23 Mistydeb
Poor Edward, I can't believe Bella would start a rumour like that. Edward has enough shit to deal with without the high school drama crap on top. Debbie
Poor Edward, I can't believe Bella would start a rumour like that. Edward has enough shit to deal with without the high school drama crap on top. Debbie
10/8/2016 c26 DataByteDL-FangirlinGranma
Ohhh, I'm not so sure I like Brady knowing so much about Edward...waaay more than Bella did for sure. Wonder what his deal is, and why Leah is there, and what exactly does he mean by "he's good with his hands"? I'm pretty sure it doesn't mean to them what I'M thinking it means. *Giggles* Most likely something illegal since a rap sheet was mentioned. Sooo...UGH, just UGH!
Missing and loving you, my Gemma! Thanks for an update. Sorry it took so long for me to read. {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
P.S. {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES} to my Honey Bunny, Choc! Love you! xoxoxo
Ohhh, I'm not so sure I like Brady knowing so much about Edward...waaay more than Bella did for sure. Wonder what his deal is, and why Leah is there, and what exactly does he mean by "he's good with his hands"? I'm pretty sure it doesn't mean to them what I'M thinking it means. *Giggles* Most likely something illegal since a rap sheet was mentioned. Sooo...UGH, just UGH!
Missing and loving you, my Gemma! Thanks for an update. Sorry it took so long for me to read. {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
P.S. {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES} to my Honey Bunny, Choc! Love you! xoxoxo
9/18/2016 c26 Tuti
Please Edward don't trust the guy! Not ever! X
Update soon xxx
Please Edward don't trust the guy! Not ever! X
Update soon xxx
9/14/2016 c24 guest
I am always a Bella fan but this time I say forget about her.
I am always a Bella fan but this time I say forget about her.
9/12/2016 c26 Lou
I'm intrigued to see where this is going - and what Bella's thoughts will be on Edward hanging round with Brady!
I'm intrigued to see where this is going - and what Bella's thoughts will be on Edward hanging round with Brady!
9/13/2016 c26 RoryCullen
I feel somewhat like I'm starving when I get an update like this one; I anxiously gobble it down and then when I finish all too soon, I instantly want more.
As for Edward and his tenuous association with Brady, I am not pleased that he is hanging out with him, but at least he has not let his guard down with him yet. I know what it's like not to have many friends at his age so when someone reaches out to you, even though they are against your better judgement to associate with, you go along with them and hope against hope that you are proven wrong about them. I have a feeling the bratty and rather disappointing Bella in this story is going to do "an about face" and come through for Edward, when he needs her most.
I feel somewhat like I'm starving when I get an update like this one; I anxiously gobble it down and then when I finish all too soon, I instantly want more.
As for Edward and his tenuous association with Brady, I am not pleased that he is hanging out with him, but at least he has not let his guard down with him yet. I know what it's like not to have many friends at his age so when someone reaches out to you, even though they are against your better judgement to associate with, you go along with them and hope against hope that you are proven wrong about them. I have a feeling the bratty and rather disappointing Bella in this story is going to do "an about face" and come through for Edward, when he needs her most.