for Come Undone9/12/2016 c26 locheree
I think Edward should drop them off to wherever Brady wants to go and then go home. Leave Bella alone and when Alice gets out, just deal with her and let Miss Bella come to him. She should also have to grovel for being a snotty b*tch.
I think Edward should drop them off to wherever Brady wants to go and then go home. Leave Bella alone and when Alice gets out, just deal with her and let Miss Bella come to him. She should also have to grovel for being a snotty b*tch.
9/12/2016 c26 KatHat4
I am so sorry I am not following where you're taking us here, especially with these short snippets. Not a damn clue. Bella's MIA, why the hell is Edward with Brady, why does Brady know about Edward's 'previous' and Alice being in jail and why is Brady picking up Leah? Edward is just wandering around like he is lost in a drug induced coma or bad dream! So confused.
I am so sorry I am not following where you're taking us here, especially with these short snippets. Not a damn clue. Bella's MIA, why the hell is Edward with Brady, why does Brady know about Edward's 'previous' and Alice being in jail and why is Brady picking up Leah? Edward is just wandering around like he is lost in a drug induced coma or bad dream! So confused.
9/12/2016 c26 Judyblue95
Hard to follow when I forgot what happened before. I'll keep reading, hoping to pick up the flow of the story again. Thanks!
Hard to follow when I forgot what happened before. I'll keep reading, hoping to pick up the flow of the story again. Thanks!
9/12/2016 c26 terriberry
That Brady is up to no good. And if Brady knows what he knows about his rap sheet, maybe that is how he knows about his sister. Maybe he is the one spreading rumors. With the way that Bella reacted, I find it hard to believe she'd talk about Edward like that. Aside from how shitty that is to do to Edward, I'd think she'd be too embarrassed (thinking what she's thinking about Edward's motivation to be with her). Whatever Brady is up to he's trying to keep Edward and Bella apart. Maybe something along the lines of... keep your enemy closer or maybe he figures if he makes Edward his friend he can keep him away from her with the bro code or something?
That Brady is up to no good. And if Brady knows what he knows about his rap sheet, maybe that is how he knows about his sister. Maybe he is the one spreading rumors. With the way that Bella reacted, I find it hard to believe she'd talk about Edward like that. Aside from how shitty that is to do to Edward, I'd think she'd be too embarrassed (thinking what she's thinking about Edward's motivation to be with her). Whatever Brady is up to he's trying to keep Edward and Bella apart. Maybe something along the lines of... keep your enemy closer or maybe he figures if he makes Edward his friend he can keep him away from her with the bro code or something?
9/12/2016 c26 
1jansails
If Brady has Leah, he must not be that much into Bella after all- so I am not getting the story there.
Brady also seems to have the scoop on Edward.
I don't really care about Bella anymore after she assumed the worst about Edward's interest being intertwined with incestuous feelings for Alice.
Her goose cooked, burnt, spoiled with me.
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1jansailsIf Brady has Leah, he must not be that much into Bella after all- so I am not getting the story there.
Brady also seems to have the scoop on Edward.
I don't really care about Bella anymore after she assumed the worst about Edward's interest being intertwined with incestuous feelings for Alice.
Her goose cooked, burnt, spoiled with me.
jansails/jsn2
9/12/2016 c26 sami69
Edward, get the hell out of dodge... Cos Brady is going to cause you somehow trouble!
Edward, get the hell out of dodge... Cos Brady is going to cause you somehow trouble!
9/12/2016 c26 i.luv.twilight2
What else does Brady know about Edward? Curious minds want to know. . . . Love this story!
What else does Brady know about Edward? Curious minds want to know. . . . Love this story!
9/12/2016 c26 2Capricorn75
Edward needs to drop Brady like a hot potato. He's going to get him in so much trouble :-(
2Capricorn75Edward needs to drop Brady like a hot potato. He's going to get him in so much trouble :-(
9/12/2016 c26 LaPumuckl
I'm still not sure why Brady has had the change of heart and what he does want from Edward
I'm still not sure why Brady has had the change of heart and what he does want from Edward