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8/11/2016 c24 sujari6
Carlisle's improving.
8/11/2016 c23 sujari6
Bella really ought to let him explain.
8/11/2016 c25 tff000
good
8/11/2016 c25 Nannyjojo
So Brady is steaking a claim.
Not surprised.
8/11/2016 c24 Nannyjojo
What's he upto.
I don't trust him.
Not sure about Carlisle either right now.
8/11/2016 c23 Nannyjojo
I do not trust Brady.
Bella was very quick to judge, Edwards words didn't help the situation, but she could have listened rather than what she did.
8/11/2016 c22 Nannyjojo
It's out there now.
Wonder what Bella will make if that.
And Carlisle if he finds out.
8/11/2016 c21 Nannyjojo
Edward really has pissed Brady off.
I don't like Brady.
He's like another Jacob. Lol
8/11/2016 c20 Nannyjojo
Great start for Edward, not.
8/10/2016 c25 shonla
Great chapter.
8/10/2016 c25 30Rebadams7
Edward, there are more Twilight zones in your own hometown and the rest of the universe...
R
8/9/2016 c25 DataByteDL-FangirlinGranma
Ohhh-kay, soooo is Brady pulling the old, "keep your friends close, but your enemies closer" bit on Edward?! He needs to get out of there and like NOW! And watch out for Wolf...I don't trust EITHER dog! *side eyes Brady...and Wolf*
Missing you, my Gemma! Thanks for the update, my Sweetie! Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
8/9/2016 c25 Edlovesme
Oh boy! Not good.
8/9/2016 c25 slc6548
Good chapter!
8/9/2016 c25 flyrbrd
Thanks !
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