for Come Undone8/9/2016 c25 
9TheFanWhoWasntThere
Talk about entitled - does Brady think he OWNS Bella or something? And why can't she keep guys like him away from her? Whatever happened to her to make her like this - she seemed to have friends and be accepted, even popular, at school? Is taking Brady's crap the prize she's paying for fitting in with her peers - and if so, why doesn't she feel she has any choice in the matter? Tell us more, please!
9TheFanWhoWasntThereTalk about entitled - does Brady think he OWNS Bella or something? And why can't she keep guys like him away from her? Whatever happened to her to make her like this - she seemed to have friends and be accepted, even popular, at school? Is taking Brady's crap the prize she's paying for fitting in with her peers - and if so, why doesn't she feel she has any choice in the matter? Tell us more, please!
8/9/2016 c23 TheFanWhoWasntThere
What is Bella's problem, telling Edward's personal business all around school? I'm so disappointed in her right now... And who IS Brady - he acts so shady and sneaky he feels like a Mob boss on the prowl. How did he reach his position of popularity in that school - there have been no real explanations so far? Edward would really need someone in his corner now.
What is Bella's problem, telling Edward's personal business all around school? I'm so disappointed in her right now... And who IS Brady - he acts so shady and sneaky he feels like a Mob boss on the prowl. How did he reach his position of popularity in that school - there have been no real explanations so far? Edward would really need someone in his corner now.
8/9/2016 c25 shaz308
Bella hadn't done or said anything has she? Beady is bad news, Edward shouldn't wate his time.
Bella hadn't done or said anything has she? Beady is bad news, Edward shouldn't wate his time.
8/9/2016 c25 locheree
He should have known that the invitation was more of an intimidation tactic. This is a person who showed his dislike of him from the beginning and now he wants to hang out?
He should have known that the invitation was more of an intimidation tactic. This is a person who showed his dislike of him from the beginning and now he wants to hang out?
8/8/2016 c25 wonderfullybedazzled
Eddie will be dead meat for Wolf!
The Muse looks good as well as her previous novel.
Eddie will be dead meat for Wolf!
The Muse looks good as well as her previous novel.
8/8/2016 c25 roxiegirl
Hmmm. Very interesting between a those two. Edward needs to get the hell outta dodge!
Hmmm. Very interesting between a those two. Edward needs to get the hell outta dodge!
8/8/2016 c25 1jansails
Odd bedfellows, birds of another feather, uneasy allies, what possessed Edward?
jansails /jan2
1jansailsOdd bedfellows, birds of another feather, uneasy allies, what possessed Edward?
jansails /jan2
8/8/2016 c25 Judyblue95
so it has been a while. guess I need to go back and read a few chapters, judging by the way I haven't a clue what is going on here...
so it has been a while. guess I need to go back and read a few chapters, judging by the way I haven't a clue what is going on here...
8/8/2016 c25 7Lizzie Paige
I think Brady is toying with Edward, just reeling him in. Edward would be wise not to trust him at all.
7Lizzie PaigeI think Brady is toying with Edward, just reeling him in. Edward would be wise not to trust him at all.
8/8/2016 c25 2muchtrouble
Brady must have some hold over Bella that she can't overcome. What it is, I cannot guess. He sure is sleezy.
Brady must have some hold over Bella that she can't overcome. What it is, I cannot guess. He sure is sleezy.