for Bleed Like Me12/12/2024 c13 Elise
I am really intrigued at the idea and where the story is going. I always have trouble empathizing with the character of Sookie and this is not exception. Her stupidity always annoys me. Eric saved her twice and is clearly going to be standing trial for it, sookie heard this, but still has trouble discerning. Why would they bobbie trap her car? He just saved her, twice. I just wish she was smarter. She never ever is. But I wish she was...
I am really intrigued at the idea and where the story is going. I always have trouble empathizing with the character of Sookie and this is not exception. Her stupidity always annoys me. Eric saved her twice and is clearly going to be standing trial for it, sookie heard this, but still has trouble discerning. Why would they bobbie trap her car? He just saved her, twice. I just wish she was smarter. She never ever is. But I wish she was...
10/30/2020 c26 
2jewelpearl
I'm really enjoying your story! The part you deleted and only put on your wordpress site is relatively tame compared to some of the things I've read - and still read - on fanfic. It was sexy good, but fanfic would have never censored that. One writer's note: you seem to LOVE the phrase 'per say' - you use it in almost every chapter at least once. Just fyi, the actual expression is 'per se'. Just a minor observation. Otherwise, good job so far!
2jewelpearlI'm really enjoying your story! The part you deleted and only put on your wordpress site is relatively tame compared to some of the things I've read - and still read - on fanfic. It was sexy good, but fanfic would have never censored that. One writer's note: you seem to LOVE the phrase 'per say' - you use it in almost every chapter at least once. Just fyi, the actual expression is 'per se'. Just a minor observation. Otherwise, good job so far!
6/4/2020 c24 Daviii
While I still do like Sookie, it is excruciating that she has had very little emotional or intellectual growth as a character.
While I still do like Sookie, it is excruciating that she has had very little emotional or intellectual growth as a character.
6/4/2020 c20 Daviii
The way conversations end so abruptly between Sookie and Eric, and Sookie and others, is a bit jarring as a reader. Why so much ambiguity? I realize that maybe you're trying to stretch out the story or create some drama but the story doesn't lack drama. I feel like Eric and Sookie keep having the same conversation over and over and then get interrupted by a knock on his office door without resolving anything. Sookie still doubting herself and Eric. It's like a carousel I get off of and it's been difficult to maintain interest the last few chapters.
The way conversations end so abruptly between Sookie and Eric, and Sookie and others, is a bit jarring as a reader. Why so much ambiguity? I realize that maybe you're trying to stretch out the story or create some drama but the story doesn't lack drama. I feel like Eric and Sookie keep having the same conversation over and over and then get interrupted by a knock on his office door without resolving anything. Sookie still doubting herself and Eric. It's like a carousel I get off of and it's been difficult to maintain interest the last few chapters.
6/3/2020 c8 Daviii
I just love how descriptive you are in regards to Sookie's telepathy. It's so fascinating to read, in such a detailed way, what she is feeling when glimpsing people's thoughts. and what certain emotions and memories feel like and look like to her. This is a very reflective and curious and sure-hearted Sookie!
I just love how descriptive you are in regards to Sookie's telepathy. It's so fascinating to read, in such a detailed way, what she is feeling when glimpsing people's thoughts. and what certain emotions and memories feel like and look like to her. This is a very reflective and curious and sure-hearted Sookie!
6/3/2020 c6 Daviii
Gosh dang, poor Sookie's rattled and confused mind! She is all over the place and I am 100% here for it. You've got me curious as shit too, like why is she feeling so obsessed with the bar? What the heck is going on? All of her internal dialogue and intrigue is very entertaining. This is great so far!
I was sorry to read you got some haters leaving shit reviews but I've generally found that we humans typically overvalue our own importance and we most definitely think highly of our opinions and thus feel entitled to "speak our mind," or as I like to call it, be assholes. Glad you kept writing!
Gosh dang, poor Sookie's rattled and confused mind! She is all over the place and I am 100% here for it. You've got me curious as shit too, like why is she feeling so obsessed with the bar? What the heck is going on? All of her internal dialogue and intrigue is very entertaining. This is great so far!
I was sorry to read you got some haters leaving shit reviews but I've generally found that we humans typically overvalue our own importance and we most definitely think highly of our opinions and thus feel entitled to "speak our mind," or as I like to call it, be assholes. Glad you kept writing!
6/3/2020 c5 Daviii
I'm getting a good chuckle out of poor Sookie trying to figure out all the strangeness of the employees she now works with. I never thought about what pre-revelation Vampires trying to glamour her would be like and how weird the minds of glamoured humans would be to her. This is a pretty fun story so far and I enjoy how you write Sookie, I really like her in this.
I'm getting a good chuckle out of poor Sookie trying to figure out all the strangeness of the employees she now works with. I never thought about what pre-revelation Vampires trying to glamour her would be like and how weird the minds of glamoured humans would be to her. This is a pretty fun story so far and I enjoy how you write Sookie, I really like her in this.
6/3/2020 c3 Daviii
Even though she doesn't know Eric is trying to glamour her, I like how Sookie explains what glamour feels like in her mind.
Even though she doesn't know Eric is trying to glamour her, I like how Sookie explains what glamour feels like in her mind.
5/11/2020 c36 AidualcLupa
I am thrilled by your unusual ideas, your stil, your creativity and have devoured this story until now - THANK YOU! But then the story ends - once again - without an end, without any apparent reason. Usually authors mark stories they lose interest in with "on hiatus" - and NOT with "final" or even "HEA". I'm sorry to be blunt, but that's really frustrating...
I am thrilled by your unusual ideas, your stil, your creativity and have devoured this story until now - THANK YOU! But then the story ends - once again - without an end, without any apparent reason. Usually authors mark stories they lose interest in with "on hiatus" - and NOT with "final" or even "HEA". I'm sorry to be blunt, but that's really frustrating...
12/16/2019 c36 GlassMazeGazer
Despite this story having been marked as Complete, ending it here feels very unresolved.
Despite this story having been marked as Complete, ending it here feels very unresolved.
12/16/2019 c33 GlassMazeGazer
I don’t understand why this Eric would hesitate and look to Sookie for approval to kill Bill here. In this story Sookie has no love for Bill and Eric has already killed some during the melee.
Also, I gotta ask — why would fairies give a crap about the welfare of humans? Sounds like garbage to me!
I don’t understand why this Eric would hesitate and look to Sookie for approval to kill Bill here. In this story Sookie has no love for Bill and Eric has already killed some during the melee.
Also, I gotta ask — why would fairies give a crap about the welfare of humans? Sounds like garbage to me!
12/16/2019 c32 GlassMazeGazer
How did the vampire who picked up clothes from the farmhouse gain entry? Neither Gran or Sookie we’re there to give the required invitations.
Why was Eric so short with Sookie about her questions regarding having the live band?
How did the vampire who picked up clothes from the farmhouse gain entry? Neither Gran or Sookie we’re there to give the required invitations.
Why was Eric so short with Sookie about her questions regarding having the live band?
12/16/2019 c30 GlassMazeGazer
This story has the shortest duration for the bond I’ve ever read. It’s very odd though that this mutual bond fades so much faster than the effects of the tiny amount of Bill’s blood had on her. Very confusing!
This story has the shortest duration for the bond I’ve ever read. It’s very odd though that this mutual bond fades so much faster than the effects of the tiny amount of Bill’s blood had on her. Very confusing!