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6/8/2015 c4 Elemental Ninja 1608
Great chapter, really like how Nruto's training is progressing. I wonder if the Uchiha Massacre will occur and if Naruto will be able to save Mikoto and Shisui
6/8/2015 c4 Takatou
I like strong Naruto, especially if he get many great bloodline. Though I suggest you don't make him rely so much on it, 'cause just like what oters had said, the sharingan has a weakness. If you can't use it anymore, even if it's temporary, it would be really bad.

But it's okay to use the five elements affinity, actually I think it would really help in the future. The mouton too, maybe he will have Tenzo trained him when he's older.

I want him to get close to Itachi and Sasuke, like brothers, though I really hate his father.

Can't wait for more, please update soon. XD
6/2/2015 c3 Auvro1
I'll like it if he became like Madara/Indra
6/2/2015 c3 kazuki2292
Next chapter please
6/2/2015 c3 Shadow-Shinobi666
Great story, I'm just wondering why you deleted the first, whatever the reason I can't wait for the next chapter.
6/2/2015 c3 3Albinounicorn
6/2/2015 c3 Account have been delect
Good work
make naruto like dope not smart it will be fun in future
6/2/2015 c2 Account have been delect
Nice chap don't make it godlike fic
6/2/2015 c1 Account have been delect
I think you want to make it like godlike fic right
6/2/2015 c3 marquis.shax
you're half right the Hyuga are from Hamura (I believe this was brought to "canon" via The Last). The Uzumaki on the other hand are descendants of the sage since they're not only cousins of the Senju but were actually a member of the Senju clan at one point before one or more members broke away for unknown reasons. Also Shisui or anyone else making that many clones wow you're really stretching things away from Canon as I doubt that even an Uzumaki (excluding Naruto of course) could make more than 20 clones at a time without suffering chakra exhaustion. I still disagree with the whole loveless marriage between Hashirama and Mito you should amend it to having other kids before being married
5/29/2015 c2 Dark
I'm very interested in the plot and overall the fanfic itself and I would like to see how this is going to develop, so please make more chapters.
5/29/2015 c1 Dark
I really like the plot so far and this fanfic is very interesting, so keep it up and make more chapters please.
5/30/2015 c2 marquis.shax
wow seriously why are people so insistent that the Sharingan and the Rinnegan give you improved Chakra control? That's the dumbest shit in fanfic history. If they gave you such great control Sasgay wouldn't have had any problems with any of the jutsus he was working on with his gay pedophile lover orochimaru. The Sharingan ONLY gives you a hax to LEARN jutsu easier by copying the shit out of them that doesn't mean you don't have to practice them and learn the proper control
5/30/2015 c1 marquis.shax
I hate when people do this bullshit about how the marriage between Mito and Hashirama was loveless I mean wtf seriously if it was loveless she wouldn't have sealed the Kyubi inside of herself to not only save Hashirama but the village he loved so much as well nor would she tell Kushina the way to deal with the kyubi is to fill yourself with love. It's also stupid to say that Madara had a kid he was a heartless prick he was probably the same as Sasuke in that he didn't give a damn about women an was more interested in guys
5/28/2015 c1 grandepic
i think the explanation about naruto's relation with minato was too is impossible for there to be only one person outside yamanaka clan to have blond are many civilians who might have blond hair and died in the kyuubi attack.i dont think that any person with even a few working brain cells will call someone with the same hair colour as him his father.
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