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6/11/2015 c5 Shadow-Shinobi666
Great chapter, I will try to review every update, well I can't wait for the next chapter so please update as soon as possible.
6/11/2015 c5 4JazzyJ09
Waiting to see how things will continue. So far it's captured my attention.
6/10/2015 c5 6MEleeSmasher
So will there be more survivors aside from Sasuke when the Massacre starts?
6/9/2015 c4 WeberCode
Sequel, please
6/9/2015 c4 dobbys-stinger
cool story
6/8/2015 c4 Elemental Ninja 1608
Great chapter, really like how Nruto's training is progressing. I wonder if the Uchiha Massacre will occur and if Naruto will be able to save Mikoto and Shisui
6/8/2015 c4 Takatou
I like strong Naruto, especially if he get many great bloodline. Though I suggest you don't make him rely so much on it, 'cause just like what oters had said, the sharingan has a weakness. If you can't use it anymore, even if it's temporary, it would be really bad.

But it's okay to use the five elements affinity, actually I think it would really help in the future. The mouton too, maybe he will have Tenzo trained him when he's older.

I want him to get close to Itachi and Sasuke, like brothers, though I really hate his father.

Can't wait for more, please update soon. XD
6/2/2015 c3 Auvro1
I'll like it if he became like Madara/Indra
6/2/2015 c3 kazuki2292
Next chapter please
6/2/2015 c3 Shadow-Shinobi666
Great story, I'm just wondering why you deleted the first, whatever the reason I can't wait for the next chapter.
6/2/2015 c3 3Albinounicorn
I HAVE A QUESTION
IF NARUTO AND TSUNADE BET ON THE SAME THING WHAT WOULD HAPPEN?
6/2/2015 c3 Account have been delect
Good work
make naruto like dope not smart it will be fun in future
6/2/2015 c2 Account have been delect
Nice chap don't make it godlike fic
6/2/2015 c1 Account have been delect
I think you want to make it like godlike fic right
6/2/2015 c3 marquis.shax
you're half right the Hyuga are from Hamura (I believe this was brought to "canon" via The Last). The Uzumaki on the other hand are descendants of the sage since they're not only cousins of the Senju but were actually a member of the Senju clan at one point before one or more members broke away for unknown reasons. Also Shisui or anyone else making that many clones wow you're really stretching things away from Canon as I doubt that even an Uzumaki (excluding Naruto of course) could make more than 20 clones at a time without suffering chakra exhaustion. I still disagree with the whole loveless marriage between Hashirama and Mito you should amend it to having other kids before being married
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