for Over in a Flash of Red5/29/2015 c2 frankieu
like the improvements
hope naruto make's a friend or two soon perhaps anko he's gone need it with the mindset
wonder what the reaction of the old man are gone be when he see's the letters
like the improvements
hope naruto make's a friend or two soon perhaps anko he's gone need it with the mindset
wonder what the reaction of the old man are gone be when he see's the letters
5/27/2015 c1 frankieu
nice first chapter will be fun to see where it leads to
hope there are gone be alot of school day chapter often see people racing to the wave mission or something but the start is also fun to read
nice first chapter will be fun to see where it leads to
hope there are gone be alot of school day chapter often see people racing to the wave mission or something but the start is also fun to read
5/27/2015 c1 
1insanemaelstorm
I understand that it may seem necessary to have a mob for nqruto to gain sharringan but its not true. You can show that a shinobi (who are superstitious) had a very bad day like losing his girlfriend then getting his team killed and then being demoted for it and then seeing naruto walking around happily like he is taunting him would result in him doing things he won't do normally like attacking naruto. Sorry for the bad explanation but I did the same in my story so if you want you can read it to get a better idea.
1insanemaelstormI understand that it may seem necessary to have a mob for nqruto to gain sharringan but its not true. You can show that a shinobi (who are superstitious) had a very bad day like losing his girlfriend then getting his team killed and then being demoted for it and then seeing naruto walking around happily like he is taunting him would result in him doing things he won't do normally like attacking naruto. Sorry for the bad explanation but I did the same in my story so if you want you can read it to get a better idea.