for Over in a Flash of Red2/7/2021 c3 Guest
And also pair hinata and naruto
And also pair hinata and naruto
2/7/2021 c1 Guest
Make baritone gain the sun and moon mark six paths senjutsu and a sliver 9 or 6 tomoe rinnegan in left eye and EMS
Make baritone gain the sun and moon mark six paths senjutsu and a sliver 9 or 6 tomoe rinnegan in left eye and EMS
10/31/2020 c5 ibaad
I absolutely love this series. The pacing is a bit slow but overall its fantastic
I absolutely love this series. The pacing is a bit slow but overall its fantastic
6/15/2020 c1 dav102102
whats with all these fanfic writes changing naruto hair colour every 2000 words, brown of yellow dude
whats with all these fanfic writes changing naruto hair colour every 2000 words, brown of yellow dude
3/22/2020 c5 Pandora's Actor
Why did you make Fugaku and Antagonist
Why did you make Fugaku and Antagonist
3/3/2020 c14 Darkdoom III
I am tempted to drop this story. I liked the relationship you build between Mikoto and the kids. Itachi should have left since the moment naruto was possessed by kurama the strong shinobi would ne alerted to check and make sure he doesn't go on a second rampage through the village. And with the background that the Uchia isolated themselves after the accusation of controlling the kyuubi in the first place shouldn't it raise some crimson red flags if the kyuubi is sensed within the compound?
I am tempted to drop this story. I liked the relationship you build between Mikoto and the kids. Itachi should have left since the moment naruto was possessed by kurama the strong shinobi would ne alerted to check and make sure he doesn't go on a second rampage through the village. And with the background that the Uchia isolated themselves after the accusation of controlling the kyuubi in the first place shouldn't it raise some crimson red flags if the kyuubi is sensed within the compound?
3/2/2020 c15 
1The skin is going to be fed
bloody hell, you're finally back! 13-year-old me will get to relive his old life.
1The skin is going to be fedbloody hell, you're finally back! 13-year-old me will get to relive his old life.
2/9/2020 c1 Guest
YEEEESSSSSSSS! .
YEEEESSSSSSSS! .
2/9/2020 c15 ChunkyFunkyMunky
Glad you are planning to come back. I have completely forgotten about this story lol.
Glad you are planning to come back. I have completely forgotten about this story lol.
2/26/2019 c14 Landonturoski
A hole killing mikoto
A hole killing mikoto
1/9/2019 c1 lachyfrost
the first thing I hate about this is that you do realise you made him five years old right FUCKING FIVE he is still a child you making himself act well beyond his age which I could except if he felt some resentment towards someone like Minato ruined his life and he was like "O I was the only option because he couldn't choose someone else's child" no child would do that and when he confronted the hokage and he said he didn't know his perents most kids would feel at least hurt that he lied so why the fuck didn't an ORPHAN that DIDNT HAVE ANYONE just except it like that. Another this is how the fuck does he know his mother would beat the hell out of him, he doesn't know her like that yet all he knows is that she was a caring, loving mother that wanted to spend time with her child
the first thing I hate about this is that you do realise you made him five years old right FUCKING FIVE he is still a child you making himself act well beyond his age which I could except if he felt some resentment towards someone like Minato ruined his life and he was like "O I was the only option because he couldn't choose someone else's child" no child would do that and when he confronted the hokage and he said he didn't know his perents most kids would feel at least hurt that he lied so why the fuck didn't an ORPHAN that DIDNT HAVE ANYONE just except it like that. Another this is how the fuck does he know his mother would beat the hell out of him, he doesn't know her like that yet all he knows is that she was a caring, loving mother that wanted to spend time with her child