Reviews: Over in a Flash of Red

12/23/2016 c1 Meltricon12
you should at least have aged naruto 12 this is just unreal

12/18/2016 c1 Guest
Also, you are developing naruto too fast. Just like how an author can give too much direct characterization they can give too much indirectly. Just slow down and you'll be fine.

12/18/2016 c1 Guest
Your grammar is poor and most of all your plot moves WAY too fast.

11/29/2016 c14 Shadow Crimson KyuubiAcnoligia
Awesome when is next update

11/22/2016 c14 avjuan37
Please make more chapter

11/10/2016 c5 jairo
you better make more story i love your grammar it's astounding

10/8/2016 c14 Guest
GAY GAY GAY

10/8/2016 c14 Kwood101
cant wait for the update !

9/29/2016 c14 imnotraven16
awesome chapter

8/7/2016 c14 Kono Yo no Kyuseishu7
So i'm new to fanfiction and this is the first story i've read. I LOVE IT. Can't wait till you post again.

7/21/2016 c6 Guest
\kkl

7/20/2016 c1 dororo
why must EVERY naruto fic I read must be " DIE YOU DEMON", "GET THAT FOX" for the opening of the story
write something new duds your story boring

7/15/2016 c14

2Yagura's Sensei
fasernating story im interested to see where it will go XD

7/1/2016 c1 Mango eater 24
Not good not good at all

6/30/2016 c6 arinasution5
Syau

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