for Over in a Flash of Red6/26/2016 c1 Guest
The moment you had kyuubi say. " oh hey who dares bother me in my sleep" like a fucking idiot and shit. Idc if that's not what you have written down but it's fucking accurate and retarded. Oh hey don't mind me leave me alone whoever you are... Totally not naruto.. Then we move on to you called a bijuu of all things a demon.. It's a fucking bijuu. Or sentient chakra construct. It's what the kyuubi is made of. And to top it all off... The juubi was a primordial God .-. Not a demon you autistic child.. Idc if you've written about a few fucking hundred chapters.. I'm not reading a few fucking hundred chapters and to only find I've wasted my life reading something that actually has no potential in being in an actual book... Seriously your on of the 97% of people on here at fanfiction who fucking end up being on of the many terrible writers. I'm gone.. I'm leaving. Don't care if you improve or not.. If this story is anything to go by I don't expect anything more from you.
The moment you had kyuubi say. " oh hey who dares bother me in my sleep" like a fucking idiot and shit. Idc if that's not what you have written down but it's fucking accurate and retarded. Oh hey don't mind me leave me alone whoever you are... Totally not naruto.. Then we move on to you called a bijuu of all things a demon.. It's a fucking bijuu. Or sentient chakra construct. It's what the kyuubi is made of. And to top it all off... The juubi was a primordial God .-. Not a demon you autistic child.. Idc if you've written about a few fucking hundred chapters.. I'm not reading a few fucking hundred chapters and to only find I've wasted my life reading something that actually has no potential in being in an actual book... Seriously your on of the 97% of people on here at fanfiction who fucking end up being on of the many terrible writers. I'm gone.. I'm leaving. Don't care if you improve or not.. If this story is anything to go by I don't expect anything more from you.
5/6/2016 c5 sharingankakashi007
I love this fanfic
Restricting naruto to 50 clones was a smart move... Now he won't master everything in a few days...
But just be sure that you don't nerf him
He is already said to be chunin level, so I hope he does that comparison justice...
I like your writing style
And abt the cliche's in this fix you managed to somehow keep it bearable...
For that thank you, may your youth shine brightly...in the immortal words of Gai-sensei
I love this fanfic
Restricting naruto to 50 clones was a smart move... Now he won't master everything in a few days...
But just be sure that you don't nerf him
He is already said to be chunin level, so I hope he does that comparison justice...
I like your writing style
And abt the cliche's in this fix you managed to somehow keep it bearable...
For that thank you, may your youth shine brightly...in the immortal words of Gai-sensei
4/2/2016 c14 guy
update bitch fucker!
update bitch fucker!
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