for On the Wings of Swallow9/8/2015 c1 readingAngel
Yeah it's been so long since someone did a Witcher story can't wait to see how you expand.
Yeah it's been so long since someone did a Witcher story can't wait to see how you expand.
7/24/2015 c1 Kami no Sennin
It's great to see someone that the time to make a crossover with these two topics. There's only one other and I'm pretty sure it's abandoned. Onto you though, I think you did a awesome job on the first chapter of your first story. I did notice some of your grammar errors but they honestly were really minor things that were easy to overlook or simply mentally correct in my head as I read. I also commend you for the beginning of this chapter. A lot of mystery going on there and I became instantly curious as to how you plan to use them.
As far as suggestions go I'd recommend Naruto take a role in Ciri's training as well. Teach her some of the skills he's undoubtedly picked up over the years. More specifically taijutsu/hand to hand combat. Seeing as Witchers really heavily on either their signs or armed combat, I don't think many would be truly skillful as far as unarmed combat goes. That's not to say they can't fight with their fists, it's just it's not their preferred method and Naruto could train Ciri in that art way better than anyone else.
I'd offer to be a beta reader for you as I'm quite good at proofing and writing in general but I've never actually been a beta before. I'm actually trying to motivate myself to finally get into writing my own fanfiction after reading them and being apart of this site for so long. However it's one thing to say you'll do it, it's another to actually put the pin to paper and fingers to the keyboard. So congrats to you for putting out your first story.
It's great to see someone that the time to make a crossover with these two topics. There's only one other and I'm pretty sure it's abandoned. Onto you though, I think you did a awesome job on the first chapter of your first story. I did notice some of your grammar errors but they honestly were really minor things that were easy to overlook or simply mentally correct in my head as I read. I also commend you for the beginning of this chapter. A lot of mystery going on there and I became instantly curious as to how you plan to use them.
As far as suggestions go I'd recommend Naruto take a role in Ciri's training as well. Teach her some of the skills he's undoubtedly picked up over the years. More specifically taijutsu/hand to hand combat. Seeing as Witchers really heavily on either their signs or armed combat, I don't think many would be truly skillful as far as unarmed combat goes. That's not to say they can't fight with their fists, it's just it's not their preferred method and Naruto could train Ciri in that art way better than anyone else.
I'd offer to be a beta reader for you as I'm quite good at proofing and writing in general but I've never actually been a beta before. I'm actually trying to motivate myself to finally get into writing my own fanfiction after reading them and being apart of this site for so long. However it's one thing to say you'll do it, it's another to actually put the pin to paper and fingers to the keyboard. So congrats to you for putting out your first story.
7/20/2015 c1 
2Apex Calibre
Hope your not dead, there are only a handful of good Naruto/Witcher stories and yours is great
2Apex CalibreHope your not dead, there are only a handful of good Naruto/Witcher stories and yours is great
7/7/2015 c1 Kabutokun
The first chapter is good.
Even with your unperfect grammar, the action scenes are easy to read and I could easily picture the way people moved and fought in my head so that's a very good thing.
The main bad point is the updates frequence. It's been more than one month and there's no 2nd chapter. It's too slow, especially for a young story like yours that has not really started yet.
I suppose this is due to not having found a beta but still, you should update soon and once per month minimum if you want lots of readers.
Well that's all I have to say, I'm following your story now so please don't keep us waiting to long.
Good day to you.
The first chapter is good.
Even with your unperfect grammar, the action scenes are easy to read and I could easily picture the way people moved and fought in my head so that's a very good thing.
The main bad point is the updates frequence. It's been more than one month and there's no 2nd chapter. It's too slow, especially for a young story like yours that has not really started yet.
I suppose this is due to not having found a beta but still, you should update soon and once per month minimum if you want lots of readers.
Well that's all I have to say, I'm following your story now so please don't keep us waiting to long.
Good day to you.
6/14/2015 c1 Guest
Update please! Really wanna know what happens next!
Update please! Really wanna know what happens next!
6/15/2015 c1 1ademolix
Nice plot. But your grammer could use a little work. A couple sentences dont flow.
1ademolixNice plot. But your grammer could use a little work. A couple sentences dont flow.
6/10/2015 c1 Guest
Really good hope you continue
Really good hope you continue
6/9/2015 c1 Guest
Update soon
Update soon