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6/27/2015 c14 67Robert Teague
You are writing a good story here, and I am enjoying it very much.

The changes the characters have been through are reasonable, and in character. I also like that you take the reader into their heads, and let us see what they are thinking, and why. It adds to their development as people.

Looking forward to more!
6/27/2015 c14 Khaled.63
Ok keep it up
6/24/2015 c13 Khaled.63
Now that's more like lol please keep it up
6/23/2015 c12 striker072
Rebecca's not going to die later after being hit with that weapon is she?
6/23/2015 c12 Khaled.63
my god how can a mother have no problem someone imprisoning her own daughter even if shes a villain ... well anyway please keep it up i wanna see the meeting between shego and her mom
6/23/2015 c12 Jakester114
Another good chapter!
6/16/2015 c11 striker072
I really hope they don't kill each other. Also I hope that weapon didn't damage Rebecca permanently and cause her to die later. Good story by the way.
6/16/2015 c11 Khaled.63
Hmmm Plesse keep it up looking forward to See what happens next
6/15/2015 c11 Jakester114
It just keeps getting better and better!
6/11/2015 c10 Guest
I can't wait for the next one.
6/12/2015 c10 Khaled.63
Oh really cool chapter i love it please keep it up
6/10/2015 c9 Khaled.63
Keep it up
6/10/2015 c9 Jakester114
Ok now i'm really curious to find out what Ron's roll in all of this is.
6/10/2015 c8 Jakester114
I bet that when Shego finds out who Rebecca is she is going to be pissed!
6/10/2015 c8 Khaled.63
Keep it up I'm looking forward to shego and Isabella meeting
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