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11arwenishtar
I LOVED THIS STORY! I also like knowing what happened to the end, though I hope you regain interest in it enough someday to finish it in full. I loved how you kept everyone in character though they're in the modern world! Thank you for including Ahkmenrah in it! :)
I hope to see more NATM stories from you someday, friend. You're quite talented!
11arwenishtarI LOVED THIS STORY! I also like knowing what happened to the end, though I hope you regain interest in it enough someday to finish it in full. I loved how you kept everyone in character though they're in the modern world! Thank you for including Ahkmenrah in it! :)
I hope to see more NATM stories from you someday, friend. You're quite talented!
9/14/2016 c3 arwenishtar
Just so you know, you wrote "wired" instead of "weird." Other than that, really good. I think you're protraying an abusive, romantic relationship quite well. How do you know so much about that?
Just so you know, you wrote "wired" instead of "weird." Other than that, really good. I think you're protraying an abusive, romantic relationship quite well. How do you know so much about that?
9/14/2016 c1 StarryNight
Thank you for writing this list, it really helps clarify things for me. Just when I think I've heard about every Jed and Octavius story out there, I start reading this fresh one. It's awesome so far!
Thank you for writing this list, it really helps clarify things for me. Just when I think I've heard about every Jed and Octavius story out there, I start reading this fresh one. It's awesome so far!
8/14/2016 c15 10Zevran-Fenris-Solas
This story keeps getting better. Totally worth the wait. Stay smiling :)
10Zevran-Fenris-SolasThis story keeps getting better. Totally worth the wait. Stay smiling :)
7/24/2015 c10 Zevran-Fenris-Solas
This story is so fantastic? Thanks so much for writing it, the world needed this! Every line you write is so astoundingly beautiful! Oh, and I really liked the comparison to Jed and Owen Wilson. That was so hysterical I was literally laughing for 10 minutes. That's an actual amount of time, not an exaggeration, I promise. Anyway, the story is great, you are great and the world is great because the story and you are great! Keep smiling and writing.
This story is so fantastic? Thanks so much for writing it, the world needed this! Every line you write is so astoundingly beautiful! Oh, and I really liked the comparison to Jed and Owen Wilson. That was so hysterical I was literally laughing for 10 minutes. That's an actual amount of time, not an exaggeration, I promise. Anyway, the story is great, you are great and the world is great because the story and you are great! Keep smiling and writing.
7/20/2015 c9 The Evil Elf Lord
Can I just say this AU makes me so I happy? For reasons I can't explain, I think AU fanfiction is the absolute best! And great writing, BTW. I have a hard time finding well written fanfiction. So thank you for this amazing story.
Could you post the complete link to the fanart? I don't think the link you posted is complete, and I'm having trouble finding it.
Can I just say this AU makes me so I happy? For reasons I can't explain, I think AU fanfiction is the absolute best! And great writing, BTW. I have a hard time finding well written fanfiction. So thank you for this amazing story.
Could you post the complete link to the fanart? I don't think the link you posted is complete, and I'm having trouble finding it.
7/12/2015 c7 Arkham Cat
This is so very good. God I hate kah... but I do enjoy this type of fanfiction. I'm Strange. Can't wait for more.
This is so very good. God I hate kah... but I do enjoy this type of fanfiction. I'm Strange. Can't wait for more.
7/5/2015 c6 magnaesquire
I'm lovin' it. I knew a guy who was one bad argument away from "Kah". What makes Kahmunrah scary as boyfriend to me is:
1) I don't think he's above rape to maintain control.
2) If he was going to lose he might try to kill Jed or Octy. Or he might beat them within an inch of their lives. In that case I would be worried about things going all "Pyramus and Thisbe" on the reader. Of course that depends if the Octavius in the story is like the museum Octavius.
I'm lovin' it. I knew a guy who was one bad argument away from "Kah". What makes Kahmunrah scary as boyfriend to me is:
1) I don't think he's above rape to maintain control.
2) If he was going to lose he might try to kill Jed or Octy. Or he might beat them within an inch of their lives. In that case I would be worried about things going all "Pyramus and Thisbe" on the reader. Of course that depends if the Octavius in the story is like the museum Octavius.
7/5/2015 c6 ReaderofBooks
Hey! I'm really loving this fanfic you created! Ugh, Kah is such a little... UGHHHHH! Words can't express my deep hatred. Is he being abusive to Jed? That would probably be like him. Still, keep updating!
Hey! I'm really loving this fanfic you created! Ugh, Kah is such a little... UGHHHHH! Words can't express my deep hatred. Is he being abusive to Jed? That would probably be like him. Still, keep updating!