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19Colorful and Free
Cute! I just realized though that Mimi didn't reveal her real name. That's the only problem I found though. Nice work! :D
19Colorful and FreeCute! I just realized though that Mimi didn't reveal her real name. That's the only problem I found though. Nice work! :D
1/15/2019 c3 Colorful and Free
Oh, Blumiere...
Something about the boy reminded me of O'Chunks. Glad to know my suspicions were correct! :D
Oh, Blumiere...
Something about the boy reminded me of O'Chunks. Glad to know my suspicions were correct! :D
7/20/2018 c17 39Foreteller Ava
...Well first of all let me hug Blumiere because he deserves a lot of hugs for the hurt he's feeling right now. ;w;
Second of all, why do I have a horrible feeling that the plan between Merletoph and Dimentio is somehow going to go horribly wrong?
39Foreteller Ava...Well first of all let me hug Blumiere because he deserves a lot of hugs for the hurt he's feeling right now. ;w;
Second of all, why do I have a horrible feeling that the plan between Merletoph and Dimentio is somehow going to go horribly wrong?
4/2/2018 c16 2TheShadowStarr23
Amazing! That was awesome! Keep up the great work! Oh poor Timpany, poor Blumiere. So many emotions.
2TheShadowStarr23Amazing! That was awesome! Keep up the great work! Oh poor Timpany, poor Blumiere. So many emotions.
3/21/2018 c1 19Colorful and Free
This was sad. No longer Blumiere's father hates humans. :C
Hurry home, Blumiere!
19Colorful and FreeThis was sad. No longer Blumiere's father hates humans. :C
Hurry home, Blumiere!
3/18/2018 c16 39Foreteller Ava
I'm proud of Dimentio but the rest of this chapter was just stab me in the heart and destroy my soul ahahahahahaha.
Why must you hurt me in this way? ;w;
39Foreteller AvaI'm proud of Dimentio but the rest of this chapter was just stab me in the heart and destroy my soul ahahahahahaha.
Why must you hurt me in this way? ;w;
3/18/2018 c16 38SpaceDimentio
Man, I don't know how many times I can say I feel sorry for Dimentio. I have a feeling that he may have done himself in, but I'm proud of him for choosing to help.
Damn, she pissed. People don't often write the sarcastic and spitfire part of Timpani's personality.
I am actually crying now, that was such a sweet and kind scene. He's just a poor bab
38SpaceDimentioMan, I don't know how many times I can say I feel sorry for Dimentio. I have a feeling that he may have done himself in, but I'm proud of him for choosing to help.
Damn, she pissed. People don't often write the sarcastic and spitfire part of Timpani's personality.
I am actually crying now, that was such a sweet and kind scene. He's just a poor bab
3/18/2018 c16 18Anonymous Girl Gamer
Glad to see this back! Very heartbreaking chapter, but very well written. Can't wait for more!
18Anonymous Girl GamerGlad to see this back! Very heartbreaking chapter, but very well written. Can't wait for more!
9/5/2017 c11 4Irondil
Really great chapter! I had kind of guessed what was going on with Mimi and Melody, but wasn't sure up until that point. And I'm guessing that Basile has something to do with the town? Maybe? Somehow he knew about Blumiere getting attacked and is enacting his revenge? Guess I'll have to read the next chapter!
4IrondilReally great chapter! I had kind of guessed what was going on with Mimi and Melody, but wasn't sure up until that point. And I'm guessing that Basile has something to do with the town? Maybe? Somehow he knew about Blumiere getting attacked and is enacting his revenge? Guess I'll have to read the next chapter!
7/27/2017 c9 Irondil
This guy is... weird... But interesting. And he also doesn't help my theories of Aldrick...
This guy is... weird... But interesting. And he also doesn't help my theories of Aldrick...
7/14/2017 c15 4AmberAngelle
I guess we can see where Dimentio gets his speaking mannerisms from... But yeah, ow my heart. The feels are real.
4AmberAngelleI guess we can see where Dimentio gets his speaking mannerisms from... But yeah, ow my heart. The feels are real.