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3/24/2016 c1 Lup-Laguz
0/10 not enough dalmations
3/24/2016 c1 2Tails-is-pwnage
Blumiere probably should've stayed home and played W101 like a cool kid.

Just sayin'.

Good chappy. My throat hurts from narration. Sleepy-times for me.
3/24/2016 c7 6MagicQuill42
Bad idea County. Ah the things we do for love.
Side note: Ahhhhhhhhhhh! Timpani!
3/24/2016 c7 39Foreteller Ava
So Blumiere's mother was as interested in the humans as he was...oh my god I'm not the only one who has that headcanon? o.o

Anyways, seeing Timpani was great. I like how Timpani got so indignant when he laughed at her "Anyone with a heart would not ignore an injured soul" line. And then she got to laugh at him not two lines later, serves him right for laughing at Timpani over how she said it.

But in general they were just adorable, and I'm glad that we got to see them interact now. :3
3/4/2016 c6 Foreteller Ava
You cut it off where we meet Timpani. ;w;

Speaking of Timpani, I'm incredibly excited to see your portrayal of her. I know it's going to be great, so I don't have to be worried, but I really want to see it. And know how Blumiere manages to avoid getting caught.

I'm actually going to make a bet on the relevance of this son...Dimentio. It's obvious that prior to his time as Count Bleck, Blumiere is going to have had interactions with all of his minions besides maybe Luigi, and it would explain his knowledge of the Prognosticus, and provide an explanation as to why Timpani recognized him. But eh, idle speculation.
3/4/2016 c5 Foreteller Ava
So it's because he can't let go of Blumiere's mother that his father is so angry at humans?

I kinda like the idea of that portrayal. It puts him in a more sympathetic light than those who simply portray him as a human hating monster. It makes him feel more real, and while it won't make his later actions towards Timpani any less wrong, it does make them more understandable. I actually really like that, thinking on it.
3/4/2016 c4 Foreteller Ava
Melody's fate is a lot less bad than I anticipated it being, I'm good now.

I feel bad for Mimi, if what she was implying happened to her was what I think she was. She doesn't deserve that.

I do like the idea of her and O'Chunks being friends in their childhood though. (Or I guess O'Chunks's childhood, since I'm not sure how old Mimi is at this point.) It's cute. :3
3/4/2016 c3 Foreteller Ava
(Never mind the review thing. Clearly I'm going to be reviewing once per chapter.)

Oh...I'm now very concerned for the fate of Melody considering O'Chunks and the name he goes by...what an adorable kid O'Chunks is, though.
3/4/2016 c2 Foreteller Ava
I wasn't actually going to leave a review until Chapter 6 but then...

For some strange reason even though I knew Onyx probably wasn't a dog my mind said "dog" the moment he started barking and I just...the idea of Blumiere being scared of dogs is beautiful. XD Even if that's not what was actually happening and it was just a Chain Chomp and he was only scared because he didn't know what it was...

I'm going back to reading now but still thank you Lexi for that beautiful image. ;w;
3/4/2016 c1 Foreteller Ava
I...never got around to reading this.
I never got around to reading this.
What the hell why did I not read this? It's Super Paper Mario, and it's by you? That's two signs this is going to be good. This is like, blasphemous, I remember you posting it too and I didn't read it. I wanted to read it, and I didn't.

*ahem* Anyways, no time like the present, right...?

So far (which isn't much since I've only just read chapter one) I'm already interested in it, which should be kinda...unsurprising since it's stuff about Blumiere. I love your take on the lore, and who the Tribe got there power and what happened with the Prognosticus as well.

Also, I feel bad for Blumiere already. He kinda accidentally got himself screwed and stranded because he can't transport. I also like the teleportation leaving a kind of signal behind that shows where he was and where he came from. Idk why, I just like the idea.

I'll leave another review on chapter 6 once I finish reading through the rest of the story. :3 (And I'll probably leave reviews on 2-5 later on...probably.)
3/2/2016 c6 38SpaceDimentio
You're really good at creating these nice little twists, Drifty. Really good.
3/2/2016 c6 6MagicQuill42
Well, that could've gone better for him.
I love those kids, they make me smile.
1/30/2016 c5 38SpaceDimentio
Poor Basile, you shouldnt be such a grump though. You don't even know the whole story.
There are only 12 of them total? As in, everywhere? ...I'm surprised that they're not all riddled with mental illness, deformities, or likewise.
1/29/2016 c5 6MagicQuill42
I feel like I've heard this one before somewhere.
1/27/2016 c4 MagicQuill42
This all make so much more sense after actually playing the game.
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