for Shadow of the Force5/8 c36 not a fan
This chapter was stupid, Barty playing Wormtail, even the same lines... all so a house-elf could conveniently save Marcus only AFTER the ritual... no, just no.
At least the fact that the Mandalorians want to follow Harry saves the chapter a bit.
This chapter was stupid, Barty playing Wormtail, even the same lines... all so a house-elf could conveniently save Marcus only AFTER the ritual... no, just no.
At least the fact that the Mandalorians want to follow Harry saves the chapter a bit.
5/8 c33 not a fan
Dobby, who can turn invisible, and Grievous, who made him a body of "almost indestructible" material, seem to have died too quickly. I find it disappointing.
Dobby, who can turn invisible, and Grievous, who made him a body of "almost indestructible" material, seem to have died too quickly. I find it disappointing.
5/8 c7 a fan of this
Poor Sirius and Tonks, I hope they try to cross the veil to find Harry, although I hope they leave with everything they can.
Poor Sirius and Tonks, I hope they try to cross the veil to find Harry, although I hope they leave with everything they can.
5/8 c5 a fan of this
I wish the omake had been longer and less rushed, but it was funny... at least a little.
I wish the omake had been longer and less rushed, but it was funny... at least a little.
5/8 c3 a fan of this
I had to look up what kind of ship Harry took XD
A ship almost 200 meters long, what a beast!
I had to look up what kind of ship Harry took XD
A ship almost 200 meters long, what a beast!
3/28 c38 jimmy.oz
Rereading this and still a great story though sucks mara died and that harry only had two women instead of at least three lol.
Rereading this and still a great story though sucks mara died and that harry only had two women instead of at least three lol.
2/9 c1 Guest
I enjoyed this story, shame about the little bitches who havnt written anything thinking they have the right to insult you . Sad pathetic little kids need to grow the fuck up and either give constructive criticism or go fuck themselves with a barbed wire dildo . Arsehole goat fucking wankers.
I enjoyed this story, shame about the little bitches who havnt written anything thinking they have the right to insult you . Sad pathetic little kids need to grow the fuck up and either give constructive criticism or go fuck themselves with a barbed wire dildo . Arsehole goat fucking wankers.
1/12 c33 pincho
Ok so obviously you're picking and choosing what magicals can do/not do, Dobby has the ability to go invisible, not to mention making others not noticeable if not straight up invisible.
Ok so obviously you're picking and choosing what magicals can do/not do, Dobby has the ability to go invisible, not to mention making others not noticeable if not straight up invisible.
12/27/2024 c27 BlazeStryker
As the male Twi'lek started trading the excess Twi'lek women the moment the opportunity presented itself, the gender disparity is completely logical.
As the male Twi'lek started trading the excess Twi'lek women the moment the opportunity presented itself, the gender disparity is completely logical.
10/17/2024 c18 vswey
mam, i tried, but this is really quite bad. You're mostly just rehashing the movies with a super ooc harry thrown in. on top of that, your writing is technically very bad. you have a multitude of spelling and grammatical errors, suffer from a series case of telling instead of showing, and just doesnt really feel like you respect the process or take it seriously. Good for you for putting words on pages and all, but this just ain't it.
mam, i tried, but this is really quite bad. You're mostly just rehashing the movies with a super ooc harry thrown in. on top of that, your writing is technically very bad. you have a multitude of spelling and grammatical errors, suffer from a series case of telling instead of showing, and just doesnt really feel like you respect the process or take it seriously. Good for you for putting words on pages and all, but this just ain't it.
10/17/2024 c6 vswey
lol what a time skip harry all of a sudden has a big ship and 200 crew? is this a flashback thing or are we skipping all that?
lol what a time skip harry all of a sudden has a big ship and 200 crew? is this a flashback thing or are we skipping all that?
10/17/2024 c5 vswey
the vaulted boywholived? no way. what did he vault? ypu have a loy of speeling misteaks in your work. it is a bit noticeable.
the vaulted boywholived? no way. what did he vault? ypu have a loy of speeling misteaks in your work. it is a bit noticeable.