
6/7/2015 c2
20Abigail Skywalker
This is good so far, but I've read this sort of beginning to a Nalu story before. I'm looking forward to where you take this.

This is good so far, but I've read this sort of beginning to a Nalu story before. I'm looking forward to where you take this.
6/7/2015 c2
13Plains-Of-White
Ooooooo can't wait for the next chapter! Why would someone do this to Lucy?!

Ooooooo can't wait for the next chapter! Why would someone do this to Lucy?!
6/5/2015 c1
13Hiyana
Oh yes I can picture a lot already. I like the beginning. Poor Natsu but it has to happen. I'm already curious about what will happen next and what person will kidnap Lucy away from Natsu. Whoever it is, Natsu will beat his ass for sure. Let's just find out in the next chapter when Lucy got's kidnapped on her way to meet Natsu. Great start & update soon :)

Oh yes I can picture a lot already. I like the beginning. Poor Natsu but it has to happen. I'm already curious about what will happen next and what person will kidnap Lucy away from Natsu. Whoever it is, Natsu will beat his ass for sure. Let's just find out in the next chapter when Lucy got's kidnapped on her way to meet Natsu. Great start & update soon :)
6/4/2015 c1
13Plains-Of-White
It was interesting, I really liked it. But you know you said brains for flames instead of flames for brains, it was kinda funny. Can't wait for the next chapter!

It was interesting, I really liked it. But you know you said brains for flames instead of flames for brains, it was kinda funny. Can't wait for the next chapter!