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6/17/2015 c3 NCIS fan
If they only wanted him to forget, it could have been Versed.

It's mind-boggling how stupid some crooks can be. They know that they are cold-hearted bastards who shouldn't be trusted, they know their bosses are cold-hearted bastards who shouldn't be trusted, and yet they expect their bosses to actually pay them what they promised!

Looking forward to the next chapter!
6/17/2015 c3 Scat210
I'm intrigued to see where this story is going & what they've done to Tony & why? Is it all about Gibbs? Look forward to more.
6/16/2015 c3 17DS2010
Now that Sam is dead, I wonder who is behind all this.
6/16/2015 c3 ldepalo007
I really like your story so far, please continue. im curious what they gave tony. Hope he is okay
6/16/2015 c3 Breakmystride
Nice twist, good idea, smooth writing. Advice: don't beg for the reviews, it makes them angry ;)
6/13/2015 c2 NCIS fan
Very interesting!

If Sam is alive, who was the misidentified dead body? If not, who is he?

I wonder why the kidnappers were so concerned that the needle mark not be seen. Maybe they injected a drug which would allow them to implant a command to be followed later?

Looking forward to the next chapter!
6/11/2015 c2 Guest
Great job. Enjoying this story. Please keep the chapters coming!
6/11/2015 c2 Guest
Good story! Please post more.
6/11/2015 c2 bobbieturn
Very interesting start.
6/10/2015 c2 DS2010
Wow Tony lost three weeks. Wondering what happened to him besides being drugged.
6/6/2015 c1 Guest
Excellent beginning. I'm intrigued. Please keep posting.
6/6/2015 c1 Guest
I can't wait what happens next! :-)
6/7/2015 c1 5milkysupernova
Poor Tony! Hope he's okay! Please update!
6/5/2015 c1 Breakmystride
Awesomelicious start, nice writing :)
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