for War Games8/25/2024 c12 James
Tftc.
her first aim had been achieved ...
- Just wow! Kramer is a tool too bad for the Simurg to be willing to keep him f
or use. That's impressive, viewed from just the right point-of-view.
Ngdgu:
building ... was currently being held incommunicado
- 'incommunicado' without communication a communicating entity, such as a p
erson
- 'in escrow' implies that you don't own it, but that you have rights or duties
to wait until a time and dispose of it
Tftc.
her first aim had been achieved ...
- Just wow! Kramer is a tool too bad for the Simurg to be willing to keep him f
or use. That's impressive, viewed from just the right point-of-view.
Ngdgu:
building ... was currently being held incommunicado
- 'incommunicado' without communication a communicating entity, such as a p
erson
- 'in escrow' implies that you don't own it, but that you have rights or duties
to wait until a time and dispose of it
8/9/2024 c14 Armiture
Wow, Piggot is sure playing hardball with Legend and she made her point very clearly too.
You've used alcohol to neutralize Eidolon before, how about some cannabis this time?
I thought it was hilarious that Coil mistook Skitter entering the cloaked ship to be her walking into a Doorway and it will keep her safe if he believes she works with Cauldron.
Thanks for the update, I enjoyed reading it.
Wow, Piggot is sure playing hardball with Legend and she made her point very clearly too.
You've used alcohol to neutralize Eidolon before, how about some cannabis this time?
I thought it was hilarious that Coil mistook Skitter entering the cloaked ship to be her walking into a Doorway and it will keep her safe if he believes she works with Cauldron.
Thanks for the update, I enjoyed reading it.
7/20/2024 c14 
10RevDorothyL
Who knew that dealing with Simurgh-crazed and heavily armed space pirates was the EASY part? The Eidolon reveal is a whole other order of difficulty. :)
10RevDorothyLWho knew that dealing with Simurgh-crazed and heavily armed space pirates was the EASY part? The Eidolon reveal is a whole other order of difficulty. :)
7/17/2024 c14 Tork01
Cool. I binged the entire story today, when I should have been doing something else.
Cool. I binged the entire story today, when I should have been doing something else.
7/14/2024 c5 zmanjz
shit that's awesome. a hard fight with leviathan, complex negotiation with local earthlings, then liberating dragon, before Taylor enters the game with a legit good idea.
i love !
shit that's awesome. a hard fight with leviathan, complex negotiation with local earthlings, then liberating dragon, before Taylor enters the game with a legit good idea.
i love !
7/10/2024 c14 Guest
wowzers
wowzers
7/10/2024 c14 Guest
wow
wow
7/10/2024 c14 202Marcus Rowland
"Don't let Alexandria use the Eidolon matter as an excuse to put off requirement."
Should that be "retirement." at the end?
202Marcus Rowland"Don't let Alexandria use the Eidolon matter as an excuse to put off requirement."
Should that be "retirement." at the end?
7/23/2023 c1 Guest
Halo Corporation
Halo Corporation
7/16/2023 c13 10RevDorothyL
I haven't read any of the polity stories, but I find this fascinating (and of course, Sean is utterly charming!). :)
10RevDorothyLI haven't read any of the polity stories, but I find this fascinating (and of course, Sean is utterly charming!). :)
5/10/2023 c13 Bubbles906
Well damn, I am thoroughly and utterly amazed by how good this is. Not only have you noticeably mastered the characters of Worm, you wrote Geneva and Sean amazingly. The “guy with fins” that I can’t remember the name of, was really well written and I want him to show up more.
FML, now I have to go spend a crap ton on another series of books. Curse you Ack, you’re going to be the sole reason for my financial downfall.
Well damn, I am thoroughly and utterly amazed by how good this is. Not only have you noticeably mastered the characters of Worm, you wrote Geneva and Sean amazingly. The “guy with fins” that I can’t remember the name of, was really well written and I want him to show up more.
FML, now I have to go spend a crap ton on another series of books. Curse you Ack, you’re going to be the sole reason for my financial downfall.
4/28/2023 c13 Jack the Sparrow
Well, shit. Guess it's a waiting game now. Definitely gonna be looking up those books, though.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Well, shit. Guess it's a waiting game now. Definitely gonna be looking up those books, though.
I look forward to the next chapter.