for Strings8/4/2015 c2 
1The Everything Theory
I spotted a few minor grammar errors in the first chapter but the second has improvement. :-) Good job so far! A little more description would make it even better! :)
1The Everything TheoryI spotted a few minor grammar errors in the first chapter but the second has improvement. :-) Good job so far! A little more description would make it even better! :)
7/4/2015 c1 1YukariMegurineTheFabulous
I loved how to be a heartbreaker, and I'm so happy that you made a sequel! So far it seems great! Can't wait until the next chapter!
1YukariMegurineTheFabulousI loved how to be a heartbreaker, and I'm so happy that you made a sequel! So far it seems great! Can't wait until the next chapter!