for The Dark Prodigal11/4/2018 c35 Guest
I love this story! Please keep writing! I really really really want to know what happens! ️
I love this story! Please keep writing! I really really really want to know what happens! ️
2/15/2018 c35 Guest
Are you stopping this story?
Are you stopping this story?
8/1/2016 c35 IFancyu
So glad u updated..looking for more of this story
So glad u updated..looking for more of this story
8/1/2016 c35 
35melicitysmoak
Yes, I am still here, following this amazing story. And yes, it's still another great update. Can't wait for the next one! When?
35melicitysmoakYes, I am still here, following this amazing story. And yes, it's still another great update. Can't wait for the next one! When?
8/1/2016 c35 30niagaraweasel
This is still a wonderfull - and wonderfully intriguing - story, although I have to admit I haven't been keeping up with it as I should... and don't worry, as far as I'm concerned this chapter is definitely worth reading and I did have a blast reading it, so you don't have to apologize for anything! I could really see the whole fight playing out in my mind.
Yes, not that Felicity has been rescued - and has done a bit of rescuing herself - they need to sort out the rest of the mess...but I hope there will be a moment or two inbetween for Felicity to take care of her wounded warrior. And no, that's not me fishing for a little Olicity TLC here...okay, maybe a tiny bit of fishing... ;-), but only if it fits in with your overall plan anyway.
30niagaraweaselThis is still a wonderfull - and wonderfully intriguing - story, although I have to admit I haven't been keeping up with it as I should... and don't worry, as far as I'm concerned this chapter is definitely worth reading and I did have a blast reading it, so you don't have to apologize for anything! I could really see the whole fight playing out in my mind.
Yes, not that Felicity has been rescued - and has done a bit of rescuing herself - they need to sort out the rest of the mess...but I hope there will be a moment or two inbetween for Felicity to take care of her wounded warrior. And no, that's not me fishing for a little Olicity TLC here...okay, maybe a tiny bit of fishing... ;-), but only if it fits in with your overall plan anyway.
8/1/2016 c35 Guest
I love your story so much, it truly is a breath of fresh air. You're a master of the English language and your writing skills are unparalleled on this site. Seriously, bravo.
Im also sorry you're going through a difficult season in your life right now. I hope you get everything straightened out soon and find a new sense of peace. if I were religious I'd send a prayer to the Big Cheese, but I'm not so instead I'll just send some love and luck.
I love your story so much, it truly is a breath of fresh air. You're a master of the English language and your writing skills are unparalleled on this site. Seriously, bravo.
Im also sorry you're going through a difficult season in your life right now. I hope you get everything straightened out soon and find a new sense of peace. if I were religious I'd send a prayer to the Big Cheese, but I'm not so instead I'll just send some love and luck.
5/28/2016 c34 Guest
I miss this story. Please update soon. I understand more than anyone that stories get dropped but if it helps I know there are a lot of people who love your story and are waiting for it please bring it back!
I miss this story. Please update soon. I understand more than anyone that stories get dropped but if it helps I know there are a lot of people who love your story and are waiting for it please bring it back!
4/22/2016 c34 126alayneni
Another great chapter! I'm looking forward to the retrieval of Felicity. I somehow hope that in the rescue Oliver does decide to have Felicity marry him to keep her out of Amanda's clutches.
126alayneniAnother great chapter! I'm looking forward to the retrieval of Felicity. I somehow hope that in the rescue Oliver does decide to have Felicity marry him to keep her out of Amanda's clutches.
4/20/2016 c34 37EreshkigalGirl
I am actually really into this fic. I wasn't sure about it at first, but you've developed a great, twisty plot here. You are able to keep the tone pretty consistent, which is great, although there are a couple of weird word choices here and there. And even in this period piece, you've maintained the key plot and character points and still mix in period-correct details. Nice job!
37EreshkigalGirlI am actually really into this fic. I wasn't sure about it at first, but you've developed a great, twisty plot here. You are able to keep the tone pretty consistent, which is great, although there are a couple of weird word choices here and there. And even in this period piece, you've maintained the key plot and character points and still mix in period-correct details. Nice job!