for Attrition2/25/2017 c1 Guest
im freaking sobbing
im freaking sobbing
11/26/2015 c1 Guest
Wow... I'm crying. Excellent job. Thank you for writing.
Wow... I'm crying. Excellent job. Thank you for writing.
6/16/2015 c1 mindgoesblank
A great one shot of two people brought together and separated by a course of events. I like how you created the distant, emotionless view of the narrator / bartender with the repeated use of third person pronouns.
A great one shot of two people brought together and separated by a course of events. I like how you created the distant, emotionless view of the narrator / bartender with the repeated use of third person pronouns.
6/11/2015 c1 
1Voidience
For something so short and sad, this is absolutely beautiful.
Is this perhaps a one-shot because it makes sense to be so.
1VoidienceFor something so short and sad, this is absolutely beautiful.
Is this perhaps a one-shot because it makes sense to be so.
6/9/2015 c1 1Jack Barrington
Good prologue and a good premise for a story! I maybe would clarify who the he was at the end although I think it was probably the barkeep. I look forward to more.
1Jack BarringtonGood prologue and a good premise for a story! I maybe would clarify who the he was at the end although I think it was probably the barkeep. I look forward to more.