
7/7/2015 c1
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As you asked, I read through the story. Sorry for the wait. Despite me not really being a Pacifica/Dipper fan, I have to admit that the story and the premise was well written, especially as an epilogue to "NMM."
If I can give one tip, double check your punctuation and spacing. (If a character speaks and another starts, it needs to be a new paragraph)
Again, great job. And take care!

As you asked, I read through the story. Sorry for the wait. Despite me not really being a Pacifica/Dipper fan, I have to admit that the story and the premise was well written, especially as an epilogue to "NMM."
If I can give one tip, double check your punctuation and spacing. (If a character speaks and another starts, it needs to be a new paragraph)
Again, great job. And take care!