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5/29/2016 c1 13NerdAlert8910
This is an adorable story. Like a kitten sneeze!
7/7/2015 c1 32ddp456
As you asked, I read through the story. Sorry for the wait. Despite me not really being a Pacifica/Dipper fan, I have to admit that the story and the premise was well written, especially as an epilogue to "NMM."

If I can give one tip, double check your punctuation and spacing. (If a character speaks and another starts, it needs to be a new paragraph)

Again, great job. And take care!
6/10/2015 c1 72mdizzle
awww cute
6/9/2015 c1 5Gamelover41592
that was sweet

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