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8/15/2015 c1 Random Reviewer
Not bad. I think you could use some practice and help on certain spellings there. Other than that, you did great.
7/27/2015 c1 9Mitsuyuki-Hime
Hmm, this is an interesting start so far! I'm curious as to what happened to the stuff Agni got from the pawn shop though. If she still had the stuff, there'd be no need for her to grab a broken pole.

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