for What Happens When A Primordial Gets Bored6/18/2015 c3 Train Heartnett
This Fict Is AWESOME !
I think it will be good if Kushina get in the Harem :
This Fict Is AWESOME !
I think it will be good if Kushina get in the Harem :
6/18/2015 c3 
1CloudBloodbane
Huh which mother is going to beat him up? Inari, Kushina or someone else?
On the note of Kushina I vote to include her. Unless an actual poll is going up in which case I'll vote there.
1CloudBloodbaneHuh which mother is going to beat him up? Inari, Kushina or someone else?
On the note of Kushina I vote to include her. Unless an actual poll is going up in which case I'll vote there.
6/18/2015 c3 Ahlerot
Harem: Rias, Kurama, Hinata, Ophis, Kushina, Kuroka and Gabriel. They are all good choices.
Harem: Rias, Kurama, Hinata, Ophis, Kushina, Kuroka and Gabriel. They are all good choices.
6/18/2015 c3 Naruto x sister the best XD
The story's very good but can u pls not add Hinata to the harem.(hates Hinata)
The story's very good but can u pls not add Hinata to the harem.(hates Hinata)
6/18/2015 c3 QuiteASpicy
Honestly, this a good story so far. I don't have any advice except for keep up the good work! For the first story on your profile, it's honestly one of the best stories I've read. (And I've read a LOT of stories!) Again, keep up the good work.
Honestly, this a good story so far. I don't have any advice except for keep up the good work! For the first story on your profile, it's honestly one of the best stories I've read. (And I've read a LOT of stories!) Again, keep up the good work.
6/18/2015 c3 lucas.brito.90834
Cara to fazêndo um minuto de silêncio pela a uma do pobre Issei ...sinceramente acho que só perdendo a memória para esquecer essas imagens da cabeça ... Acho q vou ter pesadelos pelo resto do mês...
Cara to fazêndo um minuto de silêncio pela a uma do pobre Issei ...sinceramente acho que só perdendo a memória para esquecer essas imagens da cabeça ... Acho q vou ter pesadelos pelo resto do mês...
6/18/2015 c3 JMK2
Like the story so far. Also I don't want Kushina in the harem, it just feels weird since Minsto is around and I assume a good guy, so it just feels kind of like Netorare you know? If you still need the MILF slot fixed then why not Yasaka?
Like the story so far. Also I don't want Kushina in the harem, it just feels weird since Minsto is around and I assume a good guy, so it just feels kind of like Netorare you know? If you still need the MILF slot fixed then why not Yasaka?
6/18/2015 c3 Mr. Haze
No man, please don't add Unata, I really like your story, it's has GREAT POTENTIAL, just please don't add her man, I really don't enjoy that pairing, there's to many of those, TO MANY, sure the manga ended with them together, but man that's the reason why I read Fanfics. ;-;
No man, please don't add Unata, I really like your story, it's has GREAT POTENTIAL, just please don't add her man, I really don't enjoy that pairing, there's to many of those, TO MANY, sure the manga ended with them together, but man that's the reason why I read Fanfics. ;-;