for What Happens When A Primordial Gets Bored7/31/2016 c5 Ultimate Dragon Rider
Personally if I were to do a Naruto crossover I would do a halo crossover with a narutoxcortana pairing I don't often see this pairing in my exploration of said crossovers
Personally if I were to do a Naruto crossover I would do a halo crossover with a narutoxcortana pairing I don't often see this pairing in my exploration of said crossovers
6/4/2016 c5 Guest
Personally I want the hinata is a minor character route because I'd rather this be more about NARUTO and the dxd universe not the naruto universe
Personally I want the hinata is a minor character route because I'd rather this be more about NARUTO and the dxd universe not the naruto universe
5/12/2016 c1 Guest
Incapable of dimension travel? The fuck? He just dimension travelled.. To the void obviously. I'm gonna go now and I'm not joking when I say this. Seeing this.. You probably look like a complete idiot here at fanfiction.
Incapable of dimension travel? The fuck? He just dimension travelled.. To the void obviously. I'm gonna go now and I'm not joking when I say this. Seeing this.. You probably look like a complete idiot here at fanfiction.
3/11/2016 c5 
3Simon D. Uzumaki
im confused was hinata really starting to have sex with sasuke in public and naruto caught them or is the lemon something else entirely?
thou i do hope you get this story up and running again thou i have enjoyed it lol
3Simon D. Uzumakiim confused was hinata really starting to have sex with sasuke in public and naruto caught them or is the lemon something else entirely?
thou i do hope you get this story up and running again thou i have enjoyed it lol
3/4/2016 c5 Guest
After chapter four.. Don't write again most are probably more likely to leave considering how most people know hinata's personality from the anime. And one more thing you might need to work on your story ideas it's all just op naruto in one bunch and not exactly shown how or explained properly. It's somewhat all nonsense. That's the end of my review cya.
After chapter four.. Don't write again most are probably more likely to leave considering how most people know hinata's personality from the anime. And one more thing you might need to work on your story ideas it's all just op naruto in one bunch and not exactly shown how or explained properly. It's somewhat all nonsense. That's the end of my review cya.
2/27/2016 c3 4ian2671
Never did like hinata in any stories... Although i used to... But its used too much... Just because if that im outty... Although the first couple of chapters made me laugh and my gf got scared that id gone crazy laughing so hard haha good shit dude! Ill read your other stories though keep it up man!
4ian2671Never did like hinata in any stories... Although i used to... But its used too much... Just because if that im outty... Although the first couple of chapters made me laugh and my gf got scared that id gone crazy laughing so hard haha good shit dude! Ill read your other stories though keep it up man!
1/20/2016 c3 dehane fouad
j'adore ton histoire tu peux rajouter fem gabrielle, kushina et inari je susi a fond dessus
j'adore ton histoire tu peux rajouter fem gabrielle, kushina et inari je susi a fond dessus
12/5/2015 c5 1white-winds hunter
hinata become naruto underling(maid, servant whatever) minor :v ... recently read shokugeki souma , will be interesting if you ever manage to crossover with naruto
1white-winds hunterhinata become naruto underling(maid, servant whatever) minor :v ... recently read shokugeki souma , will be interesting if you ever manage to crossover with naruto
10/29/2015 c4 Guest
I really like the idea with hinata to few fics actually bash her or show her in a negative image so please continue with that
I really like the idea with hinata to few fics actually bash her or show her in a negative image so please continue with that
10/29/2015 c5 Guest
Dont have hinata just have kurama from the narutoverse i think it fits better and i dont see hinata fitting in this story
Dont have hinata just have kurama from the narutoverse i think it fits better and i dont see hinata fitting in this story