
10/12/2015 c5 robert
have hinata as a minor and in her place in the harem kuroka
have hinata as a minor and in her place in the harem kuroka
10/11/2015 c5 Guest
Do naruto and aka me la kiru
Do naruto and aka me la kiru
10/11/2015 c5 Guest
Try Sword Art Online or Rosariovampire or high school of the dead.
Try Sword Art Online or Rosariovampire or high school of the dead.
10/11/2015 c5 Guest
Hinata is one of those female characters which are very hard to be bashed or portrayed in a negative way. I would suggest keeping it a harem without anyone from naruto's past, except kurama cause naruto x female kyuubi is one of the best parings out there. So, keep hinata out of it, though it pains me to say that cause I am a very big fan of naruhina. Keep up the awesome work, awaiting your next chapter.
Hinata is one of those female characters which are very hard to be bashed or portrayed in a negative way. I would suggest keeping it a harem without anyone from naruto's past, except kurama cause naruto x female kyuubi is one of the best parings out there. So, keep hinata out of it, though it pains me to say that cause I am a very big fan of naruhina. Keep up the awesome work, awaiting your next chapter.
10/10/2015 c5 Guest
Akame Ga Kill
Akame Ga Kill
10/12/2015 c5 Abhi Namikaze Patil
I think having Hinata as a harem member would be the way to go since you've kept to the original Naruto storyline of the two being married. I'm sure you could make the scene from last chapter a misunderstanding as it was only on the cheek. How ever, don't restrict your creativity just to create one outcome. Who knows if another way may turn out better like there being some tension between Hinata and Naruto before it being resolved. Looking forward to the next update.
I think having Hinata as a harem member would be the way to go since you've kept to the original Naruto storyline of the two being married. I'm sure you could make the scene from last chapter a misunderstanding as it was only on the cheek. How ever, don't restrict your creativity just to create one outcome. Who knows if another way may turn out better like there being some tension between Hinata and Naruto before it being resolved. Looking forward to the next update.
10/11/2015 c1 Kuroketsu
This is nice. It also make lots of sense to me. If I was a bored, immortal being with limitless power, I would probably mess with everyone for fun too. Good on you, keep it up.
This is nice. It also make lots of sense to me. If I was a bored, immortal being with limitless power, I would probably mess with everyone for fun too. Good on you, keep it up.