for The Price Of Love7/30/2015 c1 The Dark Vigilante
Hey November! good story so far(Hilarious and Awesome description of your story profile by the way)...but...try adding a sense of scenery, description of character and more words. I know its annoying (believe me I do), but doing so will be all the more worth it and more likely to not confuse your readers. -
Hope I gave good criticism. The D-V
Hey November! good story so far(Hilarious and Awesome description of your story profile by the way)...but...try adding a sense of scenery, description of character and more words. I know its annoying (believe me I do), but doing so will be all the more worth it and more likely to not confuse your readers. -
Hope I gave good criticism. The D-V
6/24/2015 c2 
5The Ultimate Spiderman
I would adopt it but I have way too many ideas in my head at the moment
5The Ultimate SpidermanI would adopt it but I have way too many ideas in my head at the moment
6/16/2015 c2 10Clair Aragon
Oh ok, so that's how adoption stories go. I have too many unfinished stories to adopt it. I sorry.
10Clair AragonOh ok, so that's how adoption stories go. I have too many unfinished stories to adopt it. I sorry.
6/16/2015 c1 Clair Aragon
How the heck is there a black salmance? Shiny salmance is green XD Very nice story though
How the heck is there a black salmance? Shiny salmance is green XD Very nice story though