
1/11 c1 dalvinman
still hoping to get an updated on this story, author if u read this, please do continue this amazing story. its not just me that think your story is amazing
still hoping to get an updated on this story, author if u read this, please do continue this amazing story. its not just me that think your story is amazing
5/24/2022 c4 Wayne
make more please naruto
make more please naruto
4/11/2022 c4 Naina
waiting for the next chapter author
waiting for the next chapter author
12/24/2021 c4 Naina
Kk lanjutkan
Kk lanjutkan
11/29/2021 c4 Iraheta 127
Please continue the story please why did you stop this is soon good please continue writing
Please continue the story please why did you stop this is soon good please continue writing
9/4/2021 c4 jacenkyleyamzon
Hey! I just want to praise you writing and how you incorporated Naruto in the story. Some stories do things over the top, some may be lacking but yours was amazing!
It's pretty much OP!Naruto but being OP doesn't necessarily mean indescribable and indestructible force, your OP!Naruto is a compelling character, I can't wait to see him in the court and win.
I also like how you balance the story from their life outside and then inside the court. There are some sport fanfiction I read that became to cheesy, I think because they are using the original work's metaphors, and it doesn't work because everything is filled with those but lacking in the game itself.
If you will continue writing this, I support you! Thank you for this, it was short , and sometimes that means the plot or the characters was not established yet, but not this. Again, looking forward for your decision!
Hey! I just want to praise you writing and how you incorporated Naruto in the story. Some stories do things over the top, some may be lacking but yours was amazing!
It's pretty much OP!Naruto but being OP doesn't necessarily mean indescribable and indestructible force, your OP!Naruto is a compelling character, I can't wait to see him in the court and win.
I also like how you balance the story from their life outside and then inside the court. There are some sport fanfiction I read that became to cheesy, I think because they are using the original work's metaphors, and it doesn't work because everything is filled with those but lacking in the game itself.
If you will continue writing this, I support you! Thank you for this, it was short , and sometimes that means the plot or the characters was not established yet, but not this. Again, looking forward for your decision!
8/18/2021 c4 Guest
chapter 5
chapter 5
8/8/2021 c4 Zaneblaze23
wow pal you have a amazing story here pls updated soon and can naruto have sharingan in this story so he have the eye like akashi and nash jr, ill be waiting for your next update
wow pal you have a amazing story here pls updated soon and can naruto have sharingan in this story so he have the eye like akashi and nash jr, ill be waiting for your next update