for Eyes of Agni9/5/2015 c6 Guest
You write so well. Like it's really good.
Especially when dealing with describing a person's actions and thoughts through little subtle things, like body language. I wish I had your writing abilities
You write so well. Like it's really good.
Especially when dealing with describing a person's actions and thoughts through little subtle things, like body language. I wish I had your writing abilities
9/5/2015 c3 Guest
You managed to make a chapter both cute and powerful. I'm not sure how you did, but great chapter overall
You managed to make a chapter both cute and powerful. I'm not sure how you did, but great chapter overall
9/3/2015 c7 Flutterby Rose
Aww i really liked all of this. The healing session was fun and i hope Katara can get Zukos chi back in alignment soon. And Kataras trip was nice. Poor Natsumi though and the whole thing and poor Katara feeling all guilty and what not v.v but then ahe and Zuko could have that moment so theres that. And aww yay that moment was all sweet in a low key way. I cant wait for more
Aww i really liked all of this. The healing session was fun and i hope Katara can get Zukos chi back in alignment soon. And Kataras trip was nice. Poor Natsumi though and the whole thing and poor Katara feeling all guilty and what not v.v but then ahe and Zuko could have that moment so theres that. And aww yay that moment was all sweet in a low key way. I cant wait for more
9/3/2015 c7 
11Ana-DaughterofHades
Love, love, love this chapter. This is so good. I loved how Katara was able to see the Fire Nation side of the war and how it would have effected them.
11Ana-DaughterofHadesLove, love, love this chapter. This is so good. I loved how Katara was able to see the Fire Nation side of the war and how it would have effected them.
9/3/2015 c7 guest
I am so glad I read this. I'm not a huge Maiko fan but since this story is focusing on the relationship between Zuko and Katara(yay. Zutara here :3 ) and I really love how the story goes from Gaang and their departure but I'm so glad Katara is there at the palace to help Zuko. Katara is someone Zuko really need. Her comfort, caring and being helpful to him. He needs that. Can't wait the next chapter!
I am so glad I read this. I'm not a huge Maiko fan but since this story is focusing on the relationship between Zuko and Katara(yay. Zutara here :3 ) and I really love how the story goes from Gaang and their departure but I'm so glad Katara is there at the palace to help Zuko. Katara is someone Zuko really need. Her comfort, caring and being helpful to him. He needs that. Can't wait the next chapter!
9/3/2015 c7 Guest
Loved this chapter! Keep on writing
Loved this chapter! Keep on writing
9/2/2015 c1 Songsplash
Wow. I've only read the first chapter and I love it! You've done such a good job.
Wow. I've only read the first chapter and I love it! You've done such a good job.
8/7/2015 c6 Flutterby Rose
So i just reviewed... But my ipod signed me out of fanfiction so it posted it as a guest likely its the last guest one, the one talking about Katara being resourceful and Zuko being stubborn at the beginning of the review. I was jusr annoyed with fanfiction so i felt the need to pop back in i guess anyway again love the story and cant wait for more!
So i just reviewed... But my ipod signed me out of fanfiction so it posted it as a guest likely its the last guest one, the one talking about Katara being resourceful and Zuko being stubborn at the beginning of the review. I was jusr annoyed with fanfiction so i felt the need to pop back in i guess anyway again love the story and cant wait for more!
8/7/2015 c6 Guest
Katara is resourceful! I love it! And Stubborn Zuko is stubborn. Im glad Katara is makong progress though and that she disnt listen to Mai at all. But Zuko is going to let her help with the paper work and stuff! Yay im so excited. Plus they had that awesome moment with the laughing! But more importantly Katara helping with paper work and just being with Zuko all the time means there will be epic Zutara moments! Im so excited you have no idea. I cant wait for the next chapter so i can find out what happens next in this awesome story.
Katara is resourceful! I love it! And Stubborn Zuko is stubborn. Im glad Katara is makong progress though and that she disnt listen to Mai at all. But Zuko is going to let her help with the paper work and stuff! Yay im so excited. Plus they had that awesome moment with the laughing! But more importantly Katara helping with paper work and just being with Zuko all the time means there will be epic Zutara moments! Im so excited you have no idea. I cant wait for the next chapter so i can find out what happens next in this awesome story.
8/6/2015 c6 Guest
Keep it up! This is amazingly awesome nas I just quanto To see them getting together!
Keep it up! This is amazingly awesome nas I just quanto To see them getting together!
8/6/2015 c6 2Totally Spazz-tastic
:D I always like bits of Zutara stories that involve Katara helping with Zuko's political drudgery. I love Maiko, but Mai never forces him to do anything, even good things. In some ways, I think she does it because Ozai and Azula were constantly manipulating him into things he regretted, and she has no desire to resemble them at all. She lets him work it out in his own time.
But with Ursa unavailable...sometimes Zuko does need a little mothering.
2Totally Spazz-tastic:D I always like bits of Zutara stories that involve Katara helping with Zuko's political drudgery. I love Maiko, but Mai never forces him to do anything, even good things. In some ways, I think she does it because Ozai and Azula were constantly manipulating him into things he regretted, and she has no desire to resemble them at all. She lets him work it out in his own time.
But with Ursa unavailable...sometimes Zuko does need a little mothering.