for The Newest Brain5/30/2020 c8 Guest
hihi i rly enjoyed this story, looking forward to next chapter!
hihi i rly enjoyed this story, looking forward to next chapter!
5/29/2020 c8 Mega Rayquaza
hi, great story! loved it! hope you continue!
hi, great story! loved it! hope you continue!
12/9/2018 c8 Guest
Why haven't you updated?! Hope you are okay!
Why haven't you updated?! Hope you are okay!
11/6/2018 c8 Ripplerz
Dude, can you at least tell us if the fanfic was discontinued? Thanks and peace.
Dude, can you at least tell us if the fanfic was discontinued? Thanks and peace.
10/29/2017 c6 MadaraMihawk
You do realize Cynthia, Red, and ash at their current level Would have been able to easily beat them right? Then you add the Dark Master ball hack, because we have to have The bad guys Rival The main character or the story will be boring/ bad.
When authors try to force the bad guys/ organizations to catch up with people who easily out class them for plot convenience than it ruins the story. If it was something minor it would easy to let it slide but a master dark ball? You know you should just give them arcues and be done with it because plot am i right? Who needs moltress lets clone it, arcues clone him as well.
You do realize Cynthia, Red, and ash at their current level Would have been able to easily beat them right? Then you add the Dark Master ball hack, because we have to have The bad guys Rival The main character or the story will be boring/ bad.
When authors try to force the bad guys/ organizations to catch up with people who easily out class them for plot convenience than it ruins the story. If it was something minor it would easy to let it slide but a master dark ball? You know you should just give them arcues and be done with it because plot am i right? Who needs moltress lets clone it, arcues clone him as well.
6/5/2017 c8 catherinecadwell
I love where this story is going and I really hope Ash is epically strong and he treats matches very seriously! Please update as soon as you can :)
I love where this story is going and I really hope Ash is epically strong and he treats matches very seriously! Please update as soon as you can :)
4/3/2017 c8 Colton Fox
Maybe you can add a shiny nidorino, a shiny zorua, a pyroar, and a lycanroc to his pokemon.
Maybe you can add a shiny nidorino, a shiny zorua, a pyroar, and a lycanroc to his pokemon.
1/27/2017 c8 Guest
You should have atleast written that the book has been discontinued. That's a shame though
You should have atleast written that the book has been discontinued. That's a shame though
12/23/2016 c8 Dhairya
Y did U stop writing it was going to be an amazing story I loved every bit of it ..I hope u continue to write even further
Y did U stop writing it was going to be an amazing story I loved every bit of it ..I hope u continue to write even further