for Prompt Challenge6/23/2017 c2 Kreeblim Sabs
The repetition in this is fabulous...really feels like a drumbeat ...or maybe better to say a heartbeat ...alongside her pain.
The repetition in this is fabulous...really feels like a drumbeat ...or maybe better to say a heartbeat ...alongside her pain.
3/19/2017 c5 JD73hsnHSBDF
omg this makes me want to cry ... i love this.
the black sisters are one of the most interesting and complex characters ever. i love them.
thanks for writing this, it's always wonderful to read about them :)
omg this makes me want to cry ... i love this.
the black sisters are one of the most interesting and complex characters ever. i love them.
thanks for writing this, it's always wonderful to read about them :)
3/19/2017 c2 JD73hsnHSBDF
ahhh i love the angst! you write this so real and the emotions so raw i love it!
ahhh i love the angst! you write this so real and the emotions so raw i love it!
10/14/2016 c6 Jade Presley
This was beautiful. It could literally be about any character. Really well done!
This was beautiful. It could literally be about any character. Really well done!
10/14/2016 c4 Jade Presley
This is just how I always imagine Pansy. Proud and uncaring about what anyone else thinks!
This is just how I always imagine Pansy. Proud and uncaring about what anyone else thinks!
10/14/2016 c1 Jade Presley
Arghhhhhh this was so sweet! I laughed out loud at the "pleasing to the eye" comment :,)
Arghhhhhh this was so sweet! I laughed out loud at the "pleasing to the eye" comment :,)
8/2/2016 c6 
1BouncyCastle08
You write some of the best first person stories ever. Usually first person annoys me but is seamless here. I can't wait to read more.
1BouncyCastle08You write some of the best first person stories ever. Usually first person annoys me but is seamless here. I can't wait to read more.