
1/2 c47 Guest
Another diamond left to the rough
Another diamond left to the rough
1/4 c39 BlackWolf0567
I like this fanfict sure not many things havr change but that's the beauty of it that just means that Luffy would have ended up the same way no matter what path he chose
I like this fanfict sure not many things havr change but that's the beauty of it that just means that Luffy would have ended up the same way no matter what path he chose
1/2 c45 Guest
The bittersweet feeling of an unfinished fic
The bittersweet feeling of an unfinished fic
1/1 c39 Guest
I’m still confused as to what’s going on with Luffy and these girls… I know that he’s engaged and all but you’re making it seem like he has other things going on in the background especially with Nami
I’m still confused as to what’s going on with Luffy and these girls… I know that he’s engaged and all but you’re making it seem like he has other things going on in the background especially with Nami
10/31/2024 c8
3SamMason666
I don't get this story, what was the point in making Luffy a marine if he acts the exact same way as pirate Luffy. He doesn't behave like someone who cares about justice, letting all the small fry pirates go, while acknowleging in this chapter, that for things to get better he'd have to go against the World Goverment, which he refuses to do outright.
This narritive of this story is doomed, because Luffy is holding up and reinforcing the tyrannicle rule of the World Goverment, which is responsible for the horrible and unjust state of the world, and they like it that way because it keeps them in power. If history both fictitious and real has taught us anything, it's that you can't change a fascist dictatorship from the inside.
It's a well written story that doesn't hold up if you think about for more than a second.

I don't get this story, what was the point in making Luffy a marine if he acts the exact same way as pirate Luffy. He doesn't behave like someone who cares about justice, letting all the small fry pirates go, while acknowleging in this chapter, that for things to get better he'd have to go against the World Goverment, which he refuses to do outright.
This narritive of this story is doomed, because Luffy is holding up and reinforcing the tyrannicle rule of the World Goverment, which is responsible for the horrible and unjust state of the world, and they like it that way because it keeps them in power. If history both fictitious and real has taught us anything, it's that you can't change a fascist dictatorship from the inside.
It's a well written story that doesn't hold up if you think about for more than a second.
7/3/2024 c5 Guest
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5/14/2024 c6 ItzJoe
fuck sake, every damn story has them following canon even down to the terrible arse childish ships! its irritating as hell!
fuck sake, every damn story has them following canon even down to the terrible arse childish ships! its irritating as hell!
4/16/2024 c7 tearsofthings
Another author without the balls to stray away from canon. Everything is the same just with Luffy being a marine. While I know he thinks that some pirates are okay, some things just don't have a grey area. Like shooting a marine. After Gin finished eating, Luffy should have immediately caved in his face then arrested him. Should have also arrested or killed the crews of Alvida and Buggy. Power levels are fucked also. He can make Mihawk flinch but he still let super weak pirates get away like Jango? Come one now.
Another author without the balls to stray away from canon. Everything is the same just with Luffy being a marine. While I know he thinks that some pirates are okay, some things just don't have a grey area. Like shooting a marine. After Gin finished eating, Luffy should have immediately caved in his face then arrested him. Should have also arrested or killed the crews of Alvida and Buggy. Power levels are fucked also. He can make Mihawk flinch but he still let super weak pirates get away like Jango? Come one now.
1/14/2024 c47 Ninetails12forever
Love the story so far. Interesting take on luffy being a marine than a pirate. Hope you continue. Have this story multiple times.
Love the story so far. Interesting take on luffy being a marine than a pirate. Hope you continue. Have this story multiple times.
1/2/2024 c28 OPFan
This is by far the most shocking chapter so far.
I really thought Luffy would get the Dragon fruit, but having his grandfather kill Enel and force feed the fruit to save Luffy was a extreme plot twist yet really good.
Also Luffy and Boa I can picture them together as the Luffy in this story is extremely different from the canon one while also having his fun loving nature.
This is by far the most shocking chapter so far.
I really thought Luffy would get the Dragon fruit, but having his grandfather kill Enel and force feed the fruit to save Luffy was a extreme plot twist yet really good.
Also Luffy and Boa I can picture them together as the Luffy in this story is extremely different from the canon one while also having his fun loving nature.
11/3/2023 c40 Paul Reverend
you should've made the enel fight longer to show luffy the extent of what he could do now that enels powers are his tou use.
He is practically invincible now in the blue sea and his observation haki is bigger than base enels without the df considering he is climbing in stats with each fight he gets in like armament, conq, and observation and that he would never need the ark Maxim for the thunderclouds.
and that with electricity, he can literally unleash his form similar to that of sengokus form, bb is gonna be for a rude when fighting sengoku and luffy.
you should've made the enel fight longer to show luffy the extent of what he could do now that enels powers are his tou use.
He is practically invincible now in the blue sea and his observation haki is bigger than base enels without the df considering he is climbing in stats with each fight he gets in like armament, conq, and observation and that he would never need the ark Maxim for the thunderclouds.
and that with electricity, he can literally unleash his form similar to that of sengokus form, bb is gonna be for a rude when fighting sengoku and luffy.