for Loyalties12/28/2019 c5 Ella
I enjoyed this! :)
I enjoyed this! :)
6/22/2019 c5 
9John Smith
Awww, I love Thranduil in your fic so much. Also, I'm suspecting that Miron is going to make an attempt on Legolas's life and blame Saeldur. It's frustrating because Saeldur is just... not a smart person, but he thinks he is lol. Poor guy.
9John SmithAwww, I love Thranduil in your fic so much. Also, I'm suspecting that Miron is going to make an attempt on Legolas's life and blame Saeldur. It's frustrating because Saeldur is just... not a smart person, but he thinks he is lol. Poor guy.
6/21/2019 c3 John Smith
Another great chapter! I love your idea of Thranduil, though I wouldn't mind seeing more of his hard edges too
Another great chapter! I love your idea of Thranduil, though I wouldn't mind seeing more of his hard edges too
6/21/2019 c2 John Smith
So... as much as I love Saeldur as a character, I really, really dislike him as a person. This chapter was beautifully written. Can't wait to read more!
So... as much as I love Saeldur as a character, I really, really dislike him as a person. This chapter was beautifully written. Can't wait to read more!
6/21/2019 c1 John Smith
Oh boy, this is going to get intense. I'm not one hundred percent clear on what Miron was trying to do but I'm excited to see what happens next!
Oh boy, this is going to get intense. I'm not one hundred percent clear on what Miron was trying to do but I'm excited to see what happens next!
2/15/2019 c5 guest
oooh, the tension is certainly building!
oooh, the tension is certainly building!
11/1/2018 c5 13TheRedScreech
And still the plot thickens. All the twists and turns. It's so intrinsic. Well done indeed!
13TheRedScreechAnd still the plot thickens. All the twists and turns. It's so intrinsic. Well done indeed!
6/6/2018 c1 thranduil's wife
you have written a series of stories, which have very good plots. However, it was extremely difficult to find which story followed the other, as you did not placed them or spoke about them in the correct order. It was difficult to find out what happened next, after each cliff hanger.
you have written a series of stories, which have very good plots. However, it was extremely difficult to find which story followed the other, as you did not placed them or spoke about them in the correct order. It was difficult to find out what happened next, after each cliff hanger.
5/26/2016 c5 Halmaethor
Great story, looking forward to the rest of the arc. :)
Great story, looking forward to the rest of the arc. :)
5/26/2016 c3 Halmaethor
I feel a bit stupid now. I had more faith in Calathiel than to think she was TRYING to provoke someone. My mistake, apparently!
I feel a bit stupid now. I had more faith in Calathiel than to think she was TRYING to provoke someone. My mistake, apparently!
5/26/2016 c2 Halmaethor
Norgalad speaking fourteen times amused me.
Dramatic at that last bit! Calathiel isn't the most tactful, is she?
Norgalad speaking fourteen times amused me.
Dramatic at that last bit! Calathiel isn't the most tactful, is she?
9/7/2015 c1 OdeFromParis
OHHHH it was good! I hope you will update fast!
Calathiel was just a little pest, i hope she will be punished. Seriously her brother doesn't deserve it
OHHHH it was good! I hope you will update fast!
Calathiel was just a little pest, i hope she will be punished. Seriously her brother doesn't deserve it