for Loyalties6/24/2015 c1 kei
its wonderful. can't wait for the next button to appeared
its wonderful. can't wait for the next button to appeared
6/23/2015 c1 DragonSilhouette
Hmm... So to be clear, it was Hùrphen who accidentally hit Legolas, under the influence of some sort of herb? And they have a healer on their side?
Calathiel popped into my mind the moment I read that. Then I was like, "Nahhh..." It's probably some other as-of-now-unnamed healer... right?
Hmm... So to be clear, it was Hùrphen who accidentally hit Legolas, under the influence of some sort of herb? And they have a healer on their side?
Calathiel popped into my mind the moment I read that. Then I was like, "Nahhh..." It's probably some other as-of-now-unnamed healer... right?
6/22/2015 c1 LadyCat
Sooo good, I'm on tenterhooks to see what happens next!
Sooo good, I'm on tenterhooks to see what happens next!
6/22/2015 c1 
30Nako13yeh
AHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh It's HEREEEEEE! I READ IT.. it took me some restraint to not review so quickly and abruptly without reading it so the screaming I made was a reaction to it. xD *Breathes* I need more, the excitement is building up wonderfully. I can feel Saeldur being pushed so harshly and Legolas struggling to hide his exhaustion even if it's seen on his face. Ohhhhh the next chapter please... *reaches out* Pleaseeeeee... You are amazing.
30Nako13yehAHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh It's HEREEEEEE! I READ IT.. it took me some restraint to not review so quickly and abruptly without reading it so the screaming I made was a reaction to it. xD *Breathes* I need more, the excitement is building up wonderfully. I can feel Saeldur being pushed so harshly and Legolas struggling to hide his exhaustion even if it's seen on his face. Ohhhhh the next chapter please... *reaches out* Pleaseeeeee... You are amazing.
6/21/2015 c1 31Brightpath2
Great chapter! MÍRON IS HORRIBLE, AND AWFUL, AND ARGHH!
:) YAY! A happy-ish moment with Thorontur at the end!
31Brightpath2Great chapter! MÍRON IS HORRIBLE, AND AWFUL, AND ARGHH!
:) YAY! A happy-ish moment with Thorontur at the end!
6/21/2015 c1 7MistandShadow3019
Enthralling and wonderfully written and brilliant. Miron is a truly chilling villain, and the plot and characters are as gripping and amazing as ever. I cannot wait for more! :3
7MistandShadow3019Enthralling and wonderfully written and brilliant. Miron is a truly chilling villain, and the plot and characters are as gripping and amazing as ever. I cannot wait for more! :3
6/21/2015 c1 Bellasiel
Brilliant story, very exciting! Very much looking forwards to next chapter, hope you update soon! :)
Brilliant story, very exciting! Very much looking forwards to next chapter, hope you update soon! :)
6/20/2015 c1 SnidgetHex
Superb! Now I'm really into the storyline I'm so glad this updat came soon after I discovered it :) Love the intrigues and possibilities!
Superb! Now I'm really into the storyline I'm so glad this updat came soon after I discovered it :) Love the intrigues and possibilities!
6/20/2015 c1 14notawriter4sure
You are very adept at writing the complex webs of court intrigue - I, however, would never survive in court, I am far too direct and would take a knife to Miron as soon as look at him. Oooooo he makes me cross. The fact that a character in a written piece can raise such emotions is a testament to your writing skills. Carry on the good work. Regards
14notawriter4sureYou are very adept at writing the complex webs of court intrigue - I, however, would never survive in court, I am far too direct and would take a knife to Miron as soon as look at him. Oooooo he makes me cross. The fact that a character in a written piece can raise such emotions is a testament to your writing skills. Carry on the good work. Regards
6/20/2015 c1 Guest
Yes! New story! I love the way the tension is building up! Please post again really soon!
Yes! New story! I love the way the tension is building up! Please post again really soon!
6/19/2015 c1 9Floating Leaves
Ahh! So much that happened and so much that will happen! I'm curious about Feredir's anger towards his father - Feredir is usually quite reasonable and amiable. I'm also wondering how Hurphen managed to hurt Legolas - did the potion disorientate Legolas so much that he stepped into Hurphen's arrow or bladecut? Also, I have to admit that I can't remember who Melda is.
Can't wait!
9Floating LeavesAhh! So much that happened and so much that will happen! I'm curious about Feredir's anger towards his father - Feredir is usually quite reasonable and amiable. I'm also wondering how Hurphen managed to hurt Legolas - did the potion disorientate Legolas so much that he stepped into Hurphen's arrow or bladecut? Also, I have to admit that I can't remember who Melda is.
Can't wait!
6/19/2015 c1 36cheekybeak
I have been waiting for this! It did not disappoint. A fascinating read. Can't wait to see how this develops. Poor Saeldur has got himself in way way too deep. What is he thinking!
36cheekybeakI have been waiting for this! It did not disappoint. A fascinating read. Can't wait to see how this develops. Poor Saeldur has got himself in way way too deep. What is he thinking!
6/19/2015 c1 1Gaudiam
Yay! I've been looking forward to this next installment very much.
This is a fantastic series. The characterizations of Legolas and Thranduil are great, and your OC's are terrific. I especially appreciate Thorontur, and it's good to see a new aspect of his character developing through this conflict.
And in general for your stories-just all around wonderful writing. I really appreciate your ability to channel both humor and angst into truly deep and enjoyable compositions, as well as portraying the strengths and flaws of the characters in an understanding light.
Thanks for your efforts!
1GaudiamYay! I've been looking forward to this next installment very much.
This is a fantastic series. The characterizations of Legolas and Thranduil are great, and your OC's are terrific. I especially appreciate Thorontur, and it's good to see a new aspect of his character developing through this conflict.
And in general for your stories-just all around wonderful writing. I really appreciate your ability to channel both humor and angst into truly deep and enjoyable compositions, as well as portraying the strengths and flaws of the characters in an understanding light.
Thanks for your efforts!