for Alive before dawn2/21/2017 c5 Guest
:-( It's been a LOOOONG while ... does that mean you're not updating those 2 last chapters you mentioned in the AN? Hope you would ...
:-( It's been a LOOOONG while ... does that mean you're not updating those 2 last chapters you mentioned in the AN? Hope you would ...
5/2/2016 c5 Guest
Please update already.
Please update already.
7/6/2015 c4 
5BatShitCrazy21
This is pretty good so far! Especially being your first one!
There are a few mistakes here and there, but they are just typos and considering how many where in my first story you are doing really good I think!
I haven't actually caught up with a lot of this story line (which is really slack of me!) so I am not sure what to say on the story line part.
I am trying to think of useful trips... haha... But honestly your writing is pretty good so far.
Just I guess, try not to repeat too much in the universe (sorry if i am being a hypocrite anywhere here, as Datura I have learnt a lot since writing it/due to writing it) as most people know the main story line and just now want your take on it.
5BatShitCrazy21This is pretty good so far! Especially being your first one!
There are a few mistakes here and there, but they are just typos and considering how many where in my first story you are doing really good I think!
I haven't actually caught up with a lot of this story line (which is really slack of me!) so I am not sure what to say on the story line part.
I am trying to think of useful trips... haha... But honestly your writing is pretty good so far.
Just I guess, try not to repeat too much in the universe (sorry if i am being a hypocrite anywhere here, as Datura I have learnt a lot since writing it/due to writing it) as most people know the main story line and just now want your take on it.
6/19/2015 c2 Guest
I like the idea. By the way chapter one US kind of messed up...
I like the idea. By the way chapter one US kind of messed up...