for Roses to Love7/10/2012 c6 Guest
I love the story and hope you will update again soon!
I love the story and hope you will update again soon!
12/30/2004 c1 Mausarello Merryjest
... First, I think you should be tremendously ashamed for the free-range slaughter of the english language present in this fanfiction. I am someone that comes from the third world, and your skill with your own native language pales in comparison to my knowledge of English.
Shame, shame on you, woman. Firstly... If you want to write, learn to -write- first. Nay, learn to *spell* first.
Secondly, this is outrageously copied from "Rose Red"... who are you trying to fool, missy?
And Thirdly... "Adriana Dona" means "The Dark Lady" in Italian?
WTF? I'm an opera singer. I deal with Italian all the time. I am fairly competent with the tongue... and ADRIANA DONA DOES NOT BLEEPING MEAN "DARK LADY"
Before you even USE a language, make sure you at least have a modicum of knowledge in what you are writing. If you had even bothered to study a little bit of italian, you would have found out that the names you wanted could have probably been "La Donna Scura", or "La Signora Nera", etcetera. Adriana does not mean "Dark" in Italian. It's a NAME, hello? Like the opera, 'Adriana Lecouver' (you do know what an opera is, right?)
Do you WANT to know the meaning of Adriana? I will tell you, since you obviously can't be bothered to do your own research outside of finding names in , the name bonanza for all Mary Sue authors: The name Adriana is the feminine form of "Adrianus", which is another incarnation of the name "Hadrian". The name comes from the Roman cognomen 'Hadrianus', which meant "from Hadria" in Latin. Hadria was a town in northern Italy which gave its name to the Adriatic Sea. A famous bearer of the name was Publius Aelius Hadrianus, better known as Hadrian, a 2nd-century Roman emperor who built a wall across northern Britain.
Oh , and Fourthly: "Azura" is NOT french for "Blue". "Azure" is french for "Azure", which is also another name for Blue. Azura is a bastardization of the word that probably occurred due to your pitiful lack of knowledge of the language: you probably thought that sticking an "a" at the end of it would create the feminine noun. This is wrong, and you deserve the contempt of every francophile that crosses your story.
Remove this blemish from the face of the internet at once and never, never write again.
... First, I think you should be tremendously ashamed for the free-range slaughter of the english language present in this fanfiction. I am someone that comes from the third world, and your skill with your own native language pales in comparison to my knowledge of English.
Shame, shame on you, woman. Firstly... If you want to write, learn to -write- first. Nay, learn to *spell* first.
Secondly, this is outrageously copied from "Rose Red"... who are you trying to fool, missy?
And Thirdly... "Adriana Dona" means "The Dark Lady" in Italian?
WTF? I'm an opera singer. I deal with Italian all the time. I am fairly competent with the tongue... and ADRIANA DONA DOES NOT BLEEPING MEAN "DARK LADY"
Before you even USE a language, make sure you at least have a modicum of knowledge in what you are writing. If you had even bothered to study a little bit of italian, you would have found out that the names you wanted could have probably been "La Donna Scura", or "La Signora Nera", etcetera. Adriana does not mean "Dark" in Italian. It's a NAME, hello? Like the opera, 'Adriana Lecouver' (you do know what an opera is, right?)
Do you WANT to know the meaning of Adriana? I will tell you, since you obviously can't be bothered to do your own research outside of finding names in , the name bonanza for all Mary Sue authors: The name Adriana is the feminine form of "Adrianus", which is another incarnation of the name "Hadrian". The name comes from the Roman cognomen 'Hadrianus', which meant "from Hadria" in Latin. Hadria was a town in northern Italy which gave its name to the Adriatic Sea. A famous bearer of the name was Publius Aelius Hadrianus, better known as Hadrian, a 2nd-century Roman emperor who built a wall across northern Britain.
Oh , and Fourthly: "Azura" is NOT french for "Blue". "Azure" is french for "Azure", which is also another name for Blue. Azura is a bastardization of the word that probably occurred due to your pitiful lack of knowledge of the language: you probably thought that sticking an "a" at the end of it would create the feminine noun. This is wrong, and you deserve the contempt of every francophile that crosses your story.
Remove this blemish from the face of the internet at once and never, never write again.
12/29/2004 c1 The American Stop The Snapes Foundation
This message has been sponsered in part by the American Stop the Snapes Foundation:
In a recent press conference, Professor Severus Snape has demanded that the rumor - stating that he has expressed any sort of interest in his colleages, primarily those of the female sex - be dissolved immediately.
He furthermore wishes to make it absolutely clear that he has not the time, the stamina, nor the energy to waste on young, oversexed witches. Taken into consideration is the fact that, as the ASTSF is not concerned with the pairing of the Professor with women, but with unprotected copulation, this message is also sponsered by his personal press secretary.
All authors of fanfiction which focus, in any way, on his non-existent romantic life, are to cease and desist immadiately.
If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to contact the Stop the Snapes Foundation via the British Ministry of Magic or the American Department of Magic and Sorcery.
Thank you for your time.
This message has been sponsered in part by the American Stop the Snapes Foundation:
In a recent press conference, Professor Severus Snape has demanded that the rumor - stating that he has expressed any sort of interest in his colleages, primarily those of the female sex - be dissolved immediately.
He furthermore wishes to make it absolutely clear that he has not the time, the stamina, nor the energy to waste on young, oversexed witches. Taken into consideration is the fact that, as the ASTSF is not concerned with the pairing of the Professor with women, but with unprotected copulation, this message is also sponsered by his personal press secretary.
All authors of fanfiction which focus, in any way, on his non-existent romantic life, are to cease and desist immadiately.
If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to contact the Stop the Snapes Foundation via the British Ministry of Magic or the American Department of Magic and Sorcery.
Thank you for your time.
7/9/2003 c6 
1moongoddess86
this is really good. please write more. i want to know what happens, and who annie gets with. please, please, please, please. i would ever be so grateful.
Please, Please,
Nic
1moongoddess86this is really good. please write more. i want to know what happens, and who annie gets with. please, please, please, please. i would ever be so grateful.
Please, Please,
Nic
2/23/2003 c6 Serendipity
You're not gonna' make her fall for arry, I mean he gets all the credit anyway, so please let her fall for draco! Oh, and write more about snape!
You're not gonna' make her fall for arry, I mean he gets all the credit anyway, so please let her fall for draco! Oh, and write more about snape!
2/23/2003 c6 totally2bulargirl
You aren't going to get them, eh?
*looks around* Then what the bloody hell is this doing here? ACK! END OF THE WORLD!
*calms down* AAw. Harry's so damned sweet! Stupid Draco. Stupid Parkinson.
UPDATE!
You aren't going to get them, eh?
*looks around* Then what the bloody hell is this doing here? ACK! END OF THE WORLD!
*calms down* AAw. Harry's so damned sweet! Stupid Draco. Stupid Parkinson.
UPDATE!
2/22/2003 c6 2Damia Rose
Intriguing. I like this conflict within Draco. Please continue, I can't wait to read what Annie has to say to Draco and how Snape reacts when he sees Annie hanging out with "The Trio".
2Damia RoseIntriguing. I like this conflict within Draco. Please continue, I can't wait to read what Annie has to say to Draco and how Snape reacts when he sees Annie hanging out with "The Trio".
2/22/2003 c6 2virgin-of-the-rose-blossom
you WILL get reiews. don't worry about that. so anyway, annie's character is still unclear to me. she's supposed to be really quiet, right? you said in anoher chapter she rarely speaks. but, she speaks to harry? i think you better clear that up.
don't take that harshly. it's just some constructive criticism.
well, im off!
Kat
2virgin-of-the-rose-blossomyou WILL get reiews. don't worry about that. so anyway, annie's character is still unclear to me. she's supposed to be really quiet, right? you said in anoher chapter she rarely speaks. but, she speaks to harry? i think you better clear that up.
don't take that harshly. it's just some constructive criticism.
well, im off!
Kat
2/17/2003 c5 2virgin-of-the-rose-blossom
she talks! hahaha =) i like this one. i think i've already said that. . . anyway, please continue your story.
Kat
2virgin-of-the-rose-blossomshe talks! hahaha =) i like this one. i think i've already said that. . . anyway, please continue your story.
Kat
2/16/2003 c5 totally2bulargirl
Ah, Draco, Draco, Draco. If you want a happy ending, you've got to work for it. But it is true, there is no such thing as a happy ending. Nothing can end happy, because happiness has no end. No matter what heppens, at least one person in the world will be truely happy at one time.
Ah, Draco, Draco, Draco. If you want a happy ending, you've got to work for it. But it is true, there is no such thing as a happy ending. Nothing can end happy, because happiness has no end. No matter what heppens, at least one person in the world will be truely happy at one time.
2/8/2003 c4 virgin-of-the-rose-blossom
hey! i like this! annie is really mysterious. keep writing!
Kat
hey! i like this! annie is really mysterious. keep writing!
Kat
1/19/2003 c1 SweetieMJ89
your story is based on and is almost exactly like a book/movie called 'Rose Red'. you need to state that it doesn't belong to you, it's called a disclaimer. If you don't you could into some trouble pretending that it's yours when it's not. It's called plagarism and is a federal offensive as in it's a crime. Just thought I should tell you.
your story is based on and is almost exactly like a book/movie called 'Rose Red'. you need to state that it doesn't belong to you, it's called a disclaimer. If you don't you could into some trouble pretending that it's yours when it's not. It's called plagarism and is a federal offensive as in it's a crime. Just thought I should tell you.