for Hard Love5/30/2017 c21 ken
I love this story hard love... keep it coming
I love this story hard love... keep it coming
5/21/2017 c21 
8OnGuard
I have been a fan of your stories for sometime. However, one of your stories that I only looked at the summery for got me to taking a look at all your stories and your bio. I almost decided to stop reading anything you write ever again when I read your , Hidan/Hinata? Do you just get a kick out of Hinata in pain? What possible reason would you have for that? There is no good reason for that pairing. Diedera/Hinata? W.T.F.? Finnaly, the one pairing I hate the most. Sasuke/Hinata. I have no respect for anyone who pairs these two together. There is absolutely no possible justification for this pairing, None! It's an insult to both characters. To be honest, pairing Hinata with anyone other than Naruto is an insult to her character. Now their your stories. Very well written stories at that. But reading what I've read today, I have lost a lot of respect for you.
8OnGuardI have been a fan of your stories for sometime. However, one of your stories that I only looked at the summery for got me to taking a look at all your stories and your bio. I almost decided to stop reading anything you write ever again when I read your , Hidan/Hinata? Do you just get a kick out of Hinata in pain? What possible reason would you have for that? There is no good reason for that pairing. Diedera/Hinata? W.T.F.? Finnaly, the one pairing I hate the most. Sasuke/Hinata. I have no respect for anyone who pairs these two together. There is absolutely no possible justification for this pairing, None! It's an insult to both characters. To be honest, pairing Hinata with anyone other than Naruto is an insult to her character. Now their your stories. Very well written stories at that. But reading what I've read today, I have lost a lot of respect for you.
1/9/2017 c20 Alexia Colette
So far the use of vocabulary and proper punctuations are terrible but, the plot is great and the length of the chapters are great. Keep up the good work and notify your beta about these mistakes.
So far the use of vocabulary and proper punctuations are terrible but, the plot is great and the length of the chapters are great. Keep up the good work and notify your beta about these mistakes.
1/7/2017 c14 Alexia Colette
you have a bad habit of using the word 'admit' and 'y'know' repeatedly. it ruins the story's diction.
you have a bad habit of using the word 'admit' and 'y'know' repeatedly. it ruins the story's diction.
12/4/2016 c3 Ms.DiamondPassion
I cant read anymore. This is uncomfortable shit.
Sexual harassment and sexual assault borderline rape. rape. Harassment.
No means no
Stop means stop.
Don't means don't.
Do you f**king speak English. Do you hear yourself.
Consent consent consent consent consent consent .
Ii don't understand. You say she doesn't know what sex and then you pair her with a sexually aggressive male who knows that they are doing wrong thing and this girl is innocent. Like what the fuck.
Do you realize Grap them by the pusssy is in ur story.
GRAP THEM BY THE PUSSSY. THE VIGINA .
Your made the male character. Donald Trump.
Congratulations .
And I haven't even started on the human rights abuse. You belong to me. You have no right. You are an object I can abuse use and give away.
A master fucks his property. Is it rape. FUCK YES ITS RAPE.
I cant read anymore. This is uncomfortable shit.
Sexual harassment and sexual assault borderline rape. rape. Harassment.
No means no
Stop means stop.
Don't means don't.
Do you f**king speak English. Do you hear yourself.
Consent consent consent consent consent consent .
Ii don't understand. You say she doesn't know what sex and then you pair her with a sexually aggressive male who knows that they are doing wrong thing and this girl is innocent. Like what the fuck.
Do you realize Grap them by the pusssy is in ur story.
GRAP THEM BY THE PUSSSY. THE VIGINA .
Your made the male character. Donald Trump.
Congratulations .
And I haven't even started on the human rights abuse. You belong to me. You have no right. You are an object I can abuse use and give away.
A master fucks his property. Is it rape. FUCK YES ITS RAPE.
11/18/2016 c20 AmethystQtpie
well, the amount of Naruhina made up for the late update :P anyway, glad they finally confessed and talked. looking forward to the next chapter! :D Naruto better man up and not lose his cool anymore when he finally meets with Shion :(
well, the amount of Naruhina made up for the late update :P anyway, glad they finally confessed and talked. looking forward to the next chapter! :D Naruto better man up and not lose his cool anymore when he finally meets with Shion :(
11/12/2016 c20 TheNeedToLeave
I dont understand what Naruto did wrong at the beginning, all he did was sit there. lol I feel like they were all ganging up on him. Come on, it was HIM who went through the traumatic experience not Hinata and I get she is hurt by the news but HE was the one who had to experience the torture (literally) so I dont understand why they are all acting like he did something wrong all because Hinata ran. :/
I dont understand what Naruto did wrong at the beginning, all he did was sit there. lol I feel like they were all ganging up on him. Come on, it was HIM who went through the traumatic experience not Hinata and I get she is hurt by the news but HE was the one who had to experience the torture (literally) so I dont understand why they are all acting like he did something wrong all because Hinata ran. :/
11/11/2016 c19 SalDalia
The story started off interesting. Naruto was pretty dark in the beginning and one chapter later you made him into an complete emo. It is like you chickened out on your original characterisation of Naruto. There are so many side stories and flashbacks which could have easily been left out. I can't really say that there is a true relationship development between NaruHina. There i more interaction between Naruto's parents.
The story started off interesting. Naruto was pretty dark in the beginning and one chapter later you made him into an complete emo. It is like you chickened out on your original characterisation of Naruto. There are so many side stories and flashbacks which could have easily been left out. I can't really say that there is a true relationship development between NaruHina. There i more interaction between Naruto's parents.
11/11/2016 c4 SalDalia
I am enjoying the story a lot. The characters are well written and the plot is good.
I am enjoying the story a lot. The characters are well written and the plot is good.
10/26/2016 c1 creamy angel
come on man UPDATE i want to what 's hinata and naruto 's design about marriage
come on man UPDATE i want to what 's hinata and naruto 's design about marriage