
9/27/2016 c19 creamy angel
plzzzzzzzzzzzz UPDATE PLEASE story soooo good :)
plzzzzzzzzzzzz UPDATE PLEASE story soooo good :)
9/16/2016 c11 raider of d lost soul
So far so good
But I was seriously considering hinata to be angry on Naruto for doing that to her
But I support your hinata also
Very interesting read
So far so good
But I was seriously considering hinata to be angry on Naruto for doing that to her
But I support your hinata also
Very interesting read
7/30/2016 c19 Suga Lily
OMG the shit has hit the fan! Keep up the good work! Will things ever the same? Sai had better warned somebody about Danzo's plans and deal with Shion!
OMG the shit has hit the fan! Keep up the good work! Will things ever the same? Sai had better warned somebody about Danzo's plans and deal with Shion!
7/21/2016 c19 Dark Phantomhive 722
This chapter killed me with the feels! Lol. This was a great chapter! This may be too far ahead, but will Danzo kidnap Hinata? Also will Naruto and Hinata confess their feelings for each other?
This chapter killed me with the feels! Lol. This was a great chapter! This may be too far ahead, but will Danzo kidnap Hinata? Also will Naruto and Hinata confess their feelings for each other?
7/20/2016 c14
8OnGuard
Not a cliffhanger. Too many authors lately have been claiming that their using cliffhangers when there not. That ending wasn't even close to being a cliffhanger.

Not a cliffhanger. Too many authors lately have been claiming that their using cliffhangers when there not. That ending wasn't even close to being a cliffhanger.
7/18/2016 c19 Guest
I really hope hinata doesn't get captured. If she does I hope she doesn't get hurt. Please update soon!
I really hope hinata doesn't get captured. If she does I hope she doesn't get hurt. Please update soon!
7/19/2016 c19
9Gangnam Style X3
She's about to get kidnapped in the next chapter, isn't she? Poor, poor Hinata... She should have just ran to her room instead... *sigh* Naruto better hurry to save his "wife".
Great chapter, very suspensful and lovey. Please update soon!

She's about to get kidnapped in the next chapter, isn't she? Poor, poor Hinata... She should have just ran to her room instead... *sigh* Naruto better hurry to save his "wife".
Great chapter, very suspensful and lovey. Please update soon!
7/19/2016 c19
9NarHina
Loved but damn now Danzo has a chance to get Hinata if she is out of the estate.
It was all going so well two.
Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

Loved but damn now Danzo has a chance to get Hinata if she is out of the estate.
It was all going so well two.
Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
7/19/2016 c19 Angi sleeps
More, more, more!
I need Moore!
Naruto, go and get your girl!
Hurry up, dude!
More, more, more!
I need Moore!
Naruto, go and get your girl!
Hurry up, dude!
7/18/2016 c19
34jankitty13
Giess it's obvious Shion doesn't care about Toneri-she only cares about herself. Makes me feel a little sorry for him (even though he's a villain) and wonder what will happen if she does get pregnant?
Can't wait for the next chapter, hope nothing happens to Hinata and that Naruto gets his act together in time.

Giess it's obvious Shion doesn't care about Toneri-she only cares about herself. Makes me feel a little sorry for him (even though he's a villain) and wonder what will happen if she does get pregnant?
Can't wait for the next chapter, hope nothing happens to Hinata and that Naruto gets his act together in time.
7/18/2016 c19 Breakthrough92
oh shit D: i wonder if now that Hinata ran off, the others will capture her.
great chapter!
oh shit D: i wonder if now that Hinata ran off, the others will capture her.
great chapter!